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31.  Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were relatively simple and static, Barbara McClintock adhered to her own more complicated ideas about how genes might operate, and in 1983, at the age of 81, was awarded a Nobel Prize for her discovery that the genes in corn are capable of moving from one chromosomal site to another.

(A)  Unlike the conviction held by many of her colleagues that genes were

(B)  Although many of her colleagues were of the conviction of genes being

(C)  Contrary to many of her colleagues being convinced that genes were

(D)  Even though many of her colleagues were convinced that genes were

(E)  Even with many of her colleagues convinced of genes being

纠结E选项解释：E  Even with many of her colleagues … is wordy and indirect.

Wordy我觉得蛮好解释的，being不对，但是indirect呢？是表达不好么？

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浅吟天

我记得以前看到过一句话，能用从句写清楚的不要用很多介短重叠，D明显direct啊
ps 看到楼主ID很亲切 二月看过你帖子的

qiuhua01234567

我记得以前看到过一句话，能用从句写清楚的不要用很多介短重叠，D明显direct啊
ps 看到楼主ID很亲切 二月看过你帖子的

-- by 会员 浅吟天 (2012/3/3 15:05:05)

这样的，，，多谢哈。。

zhongshanlh

想听一听这个E中with的用法是否正确