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blur

Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

(A) Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore

(B) When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he

(C) Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh

(D) Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh（E）

(E) Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh

如果把therefore， 放在 he 的前面呢？A 是不是就对了？ E总是看着不舒服。

请指正。

horsefish

以下是引用blur在2004-9-2 6:50:00的发言：

Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore refused to carry even a pound of mail, despite being offered $1,000 to do so.

(A) Charles Lindbergh, for his attempt at a solo transatlantic flight, was very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he therefore

(B) When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he

(C) Since he was very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, so Charles Lindbergh

(D) Being very reluctant to carry any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight was the reason that Charles Lindbergh（E）

(E) Very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane when he attempted his solo transatlantic flight, Charles Lindbergh

如果把therefore， 放在 he 的前面呢？A 是不是就对了？ E总是看着不舒服。

请指正。for his attempt 多不顺眼啊(应该动词优先), 另外therefore 有redundant的嫌疑, 因为有个attempt了.(偶不是NN)

blur

for his attempt 多不顺眼啊(应该动词优先

-this makes a lot of sense. it's a good reason not to choose A,

Thanks

dinosaure

therefore是副词,即使放在前面也不能接句子,除非用逗号隔开.therefore,xxxx

bobochen

再问大全206：我选的B,B错在哪里？请NN指教！

      

boborich

同问。

gujianp2002

同问怎么没有NN帮忙回答呢.

lukrenee

(B) When Charles Lindbergh was attempting his solo transatlantic flight, being very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane, he

注意being是多余的，如果有being用做修饰必错（但用做被动是不可省略的，如本例未画线部分），另外，用过去进行时不对，因为他的attempt是一个持续的过程，very reluctant to have any extra weight on his plane也是一个持续的状态，两个持续状态不好用进行时，因为进行时只表示一个点的时间。

叽里咕噜

不太明白楼上说的“如果有being修饰必错”的说法，有没有什么出处呢？

有没有NN能帮忙解释一下呀？谢谢：）

nicole_song

同问楼上的