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发表于 2012-2-24 12:06:21 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
100 Colleges and universities should require their students to spend at least one semester studying in a foreign country.

Write a response in which you discuss your views on the policy and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider the possible consequences of implementing the policy and explain how these consequences shape your position.



At present, studying in a foreign country has been rather popular among college and university students with the increasingly collaboration and communication between countries. Should colleges and universities require every student to study in a foreign country at least one semester? In my view, the speaker makes the statement unfairly with some omission. I agree in so far as studying abroad is beneficial to some students if this policy carried on by universities and colleges. Yet, in some cases, this recommendation will produce negative effects to some students.



Admittedly, to some students, implementing the policy will definitely bring advantages. First off, a foreign country, which seems be totally different from a student's motherland, with diversity of cultures and customs. Thus, students filled with curiosity are eager to learn the difference, at the same time, their horizons are also broadened. Second, due to the discrepancy of cultures and backgrounds of education, usually students from different countries have various opinions as to one issue. Students from other countries can exchange ideas with local students so that they all enhance their knowledge as well as reap camaraderie. Last but not least, independence of students who study other countries will absolutely be improved. A foreign student confronts an acquainted surrounding by himself, he has no choice but solve all sort of problems he may encounter without help from his parents and good friends. After all, one person must be independent at last. In this light, studying in foreign countries indeed is advantageous.



However, to some students, studying in a foreign country would pose some problems. In the first place, some students who are introverted and not good at communication, if he steps into a strange environment, he will become more reticent and afraid to talk with unfamiliar people. He may feel lonely, be fed up with everything strange and miss his families too much to concentrate on learning; these negative emotions will eventually be detrimental to his study. In the second place, due to discrepancy of body conditions, some students do not adept to unique climate in foreign countries. Take my cousin as an example. She studies in Beijing, China

, whose weather is dry and cold. When she was exchanged to Singapore at her junior semester in university for one semester, she did not adjust the climate with humidification so that she always was sick in Singapore. In the third place, even to a well-adapted student, it costs much money for learning abroad, in the meanwhile, increasing the family burden. After all, not all students are able to afford the high expense, a few of them actually rely on debt and scholarship studying in universities and colleges. From this point, this policy is not applied to all students considering its limits.


In fact, schools should provide opportunities to students who are suitable and able to afford expense, although it is unrealistic to require every student to study abroad. After all, students have all kinds of characteristics. It is advisable for them to choose the optimum method not the popular approach when it comes to surrounding of studying.



To sum up, the speaker does not sufficiently take merits and weakness of this policy of implement into consideration. As far as I am concerned, the executors of the policy should analysis case by case before implementation. They shouldenact different schemesto each student to judge whether the one may be adept to the unfamiliar surroundings.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-2-24 12:07:59 | 只看该作者
排版又乱了。无语
板凳
发表于 2012-2-25 00:50:37 | 只看该作者
感觉这篇写的也很不错,貌似作者对这种写作手法已经很熟悉了,坚持加油!
地板
发表于 2012-2-25 21:34:27 | 只看该作者
稍微轻拍下,举自己亲戚的例子是不是没有说服力。
能不能说的稍微深入一些~

看到了各种北美范文的句子模式啊~~

嗯,总的来说,感觉写的挺好的~
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-2-26 11:18:05 | 只看该作者
稍微轻拍下,举自己亲戚的例子是不是没有说服力。
能不能说的稍微深入一些~

看到了各种北美范文的句子模式啊~~

嗯,总的来说,感觉写的挺好的~
-- by 会员 uniquechong (2012/2/25 21:34:27)

谢谢。举亲戚的例子是我编的,我想不出更好的例子。你有什么建议吗?
我咋没看出来北美范文的句子模式
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-2-26 11:19:32 | 只看该作者
感觉这篇写的也很不错,貌似作者对这种写作手法已经很熟悉了,坚持加油!
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/2/25 0:50:37)

谢谢。我就这一种思路。我写得不跑题吧。
7#
发表于 2012-2-26 11:29:11 | 只看该作者
感觉这篇写的也很不错,貌似作者对这种写作手法已经很熟悉了,坚持加油!
-- by 会员 竹林中人 (2012/2/25 0:50:37)


谢谢。我就这一种思路。我写得不跑题吧。
-- by 会员 雨不下 (2012/2/26 11:19:32)

不跑,这样跟很多人不一样,比较好
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