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[作文互改] 拙文一篇!求狠拍,大家提的意见我一定虚心思考并与大家讨论。拍完我再改再求拍~~

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发表于 2012-2-7 01:07:14 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
那个青霉素的例子好像用得不是很恰当,但是又想不出什么好例子来证明,对普通的事物的强烈兴趣可以带来好主意。大讲堂上提供了微波炉和便条纸发明的例子,还有别的例子吗?


103 The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
WORDS: 453          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2012/2/7 0:58:22


This issue conveys the idea that passionate interests in commonplace things can take us best ideas. While this contention could be plausible to some extent, it is inevitable too narrow in its scope. That is to say, we should take a look at panorama in order to gain a better understanding of the gist of the issue.


First off, there is no denying that all of us are benefit from the best ideas came from people's passionate interests in commonplace things. Admittedly, it is unimaginative for someone to insist on doing experiences in the lab without intense interest to his scientific program, while his partners are enjoying sunny beach in Hawaii and funs of playing volleyball with their friends and relatives. Take Penicillin as a convincing instant, which is the result of Alexander Fleming's fierce interest and painstaking work in 1928. He left some plates with bacteria unwashed in his laboratory and went to his holiday. However, when he came back he found the plates are filled with mold, which is later named Penicillin, and the bacteria are all died. In this point, Fleming's long-time's thriving for commonplace thing of life lead to the discovery of Penicillin.


Nonetheless, I have never contended the idea that all good ideas came from intense interest in commonplace things. As is universally known, some most advanced scientific research are impossible to be touched in our everyday life. For example, astronomers are deserved to focus on observing space phenomenon and reflect the origination of cosmos rather than devote themselves to research of commonplace things. Bill Gates, the founder of Microsoft Corporation, developed wide-used Microsoft Windows Operation with his severe interest in computer after he drop out from Harvard University. Yet computers are far more a commonplace thing at that time. Thus, good ideas may come from our passionate interests in commonplace things but merely.


Actually, we can never get any good ideas with solely intense interest in common things, that is to say passionate interest is not the only dependent factor to our good ideas. As the world itself has been formulated into a step of sophistication and versatility, many other factors like courage for truth, long-term academic accumulation, the appropriate social and economic support, the good-timing birth of geniuses and so on. In this case, only somebody with long-term insistence to the commonplace things he interested and a proper outside environment can he gains good ideas.


In retrospect, it is indeed true that people can get good ideas if they have passionate interest in commonplace things but not merely. Many other factors are crucial as well as intense interest on the way for us to thrive for good ideas and cannot be simply ignored or completely disregarded.
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沙发
发表于 2012-2-7 07:12:39 | 只看该作者
这篇文章我一直没法下手,我觉得文章你的分析挺完整的,每段的内容层层递进,我还没有想过在写3段正文的时候写3个不同的方面,就只有正正负或负正正的想法。至于你说的青霉素的例子,我不知道是不是一定要死扣“对普通的事物的强烈兴趣可以带来好主意”?

1. 牛顿因为一直对万有引力有兴趣,才能在苹果落地这种平常现象中悟出道理,但如果要死咬对普通事物的强烈兴趣,貌似这个例子也不合理;
2. 我自己编的:一人对吃东西特感兴趣,吃了很多地方的特色小吃,但发现小吃的地方都比较分散,就产生了开办小吃街的想法,如长沙的“火宫殿”,后来很成功。

哈哈,欢迎一起讨论,我也是新手一枚!
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-2-7 22:46:03 | 只看该作者
这篇文章我一直没法下手,我觉得文章你的分析挺完整的,每段的内容层层递进,我还没有想过在写3段正文的时候写3个不同的方面,就只有正正负或负正正的想法。至于你说的青霉素的例子,我不知道是不是一定要死扣“对普通的事物的强烈兴趣可以带来好主意”?

1. 牛顿因为一直对万有引力有兴趣,才能在苹果落地这种平常现象中悟出道理,但如果要死咬对普通事物的强烈兴趣,貌似这个例子也不合理;
2. 我自己编的:一人对吃东西特感兴趣,吃了很多地方的特色小吃,但发现小吃的地方都比较分散,就产生了开办小吃街的想法,如长沙的“火宫殿”,后来很成功。

哈哈,欢迎一起讨论,我也是新手一枚!
-- by 会员 fanfan3200 (2012/2/7 7:12:39)



呵呵,谢谢指导!牛顿发现万有引力的例子应该可以套用的,不过我担心这些名人被用了太多了,会不会不好?类似的还有爱因斯坦,伽利略,哥白尼等。
下次我想不出例子的时候,也会考虑自己编例子的。
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-2-7 22:46:43 | 只看该作者
这篇文章我一直没法下手,我觉得文章你的分析挺完整的,每段的内容层层递进,我还没有想过在写3段正文的时候写3个不同的方面,就只有正正负或负正正的想法。至于你说的青霉素的例子,我不知道是不是一定要死扣“对普通的事物的强烈兴趣可以带来好主意”?

1. 牛顿因为一直对万有引力有兴趣,才能在苹果落地这种平常现象中悟出道理,但如果要死咬对普通事物的强烈兴趣,貌似这个例子也不合理;
2. 我自己编的:一人对吃东西特感兴趣,吃了很多地方的特色小吃,但发现小吃的地方都比较分散,就产生了开办小吃街的想法,如长沙的“火宫殿”,后来很成功。

哈哈,欢迎一起讨论,我也是新手一枚!
-- by 会员 fanfan3200 (2012/2/7 7:12:39)



你把你的文章在下面给一个链接,我们互相拍一拍吧!呵呵
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发表于 2012-2-8 08:11:07 | 只看该作者
呵呵,这一篇我还没有写了,我前段时间发过几篇,你可以搜索我的ID,也欢迎你指点。
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