OG 245请帮我确认原题

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以下是引用lissy_721在2007/11/27 23:15:00的发言：

还是不明白OG11里说的，incorrect pronoun use?

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nancyhearste

B 选项说incorrect pronoun use ：到底是代词his还是代词which用错啊？

若是his用错，那是指his只能指代主句的主语Bartok？

若是which用错，那是指which并不是只指代 his 12-tone system,而是用来指代Schoenberg and his twelve-tone system，但是若是用来指代他们两个，那不用which要用什么词？

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nancyhearste

OG11版的解释在此
95. Unlike Schcenberq's 12-tone system that dominated the music of the postwar period, Bartok founded no school and left behind only a handful of disciples.
       A. Schoenberg's 12-tone system that dominated
       B. Schoenberg and his 12-tone system which dominated
       C. Schoenberg, whose 12-tone system dominated
       D. the 12-tone system of Schoenberg that hasdominated
       E. Schoenberg and the 12-tone system,dominating

Comparison + Modification
The original sentence makes the logical error of comparing Bartok to the 12-tone system. The lack of clarity results in the implication that the system might have founded a school or left behind disciples. The sentence must clearly indicate that it is the individuals, Bartok and Schoenberg, who are being compared. It must also make it plain that it was the system that dominated the music of the postwar period.

A Illogically compares Bartok to the 12-tone system, rather than to Schoenberg

B Incorrect use of and illogically compares Bartok to the system; incorrect pronoun use

C Correct. This sentence makes the logical comparison between the individuals, and the relative clause clarifies that it is the system that dominated the music of the postwar period.

D Illogically compares Bartok to the system, rather than to Schoenberg, perfect verb form has dominated distorts the meaning by indicating that the system continues to dominate music today

E Incorrect use of and illogically compares Bartok to the system as well as Schoenberg; introduces confusion about what dominating modifies

The correct answer is C.