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发表于 2004-8-7 01:23:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用pumpkin在2004-8-7 1:07:00的发言:

Topic: It has been said, "Not everything that is learned is contained in books." Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?





According to the limitations of books, it is true that people do not learn everything in books. 上来就怪兮兮的, 你仔细看看, 意思有点问题的。On account of some disadvantages of book, it is ture that people do not learn every from book. To some extent, people can learn knowledge from experience in their social activities and work. But in my opinion, that people enrich knowledge by reading books has more advantages in many ways. There are some reasons as follows. 下面的他们说了, 偶就不罗嗦。






First, the 这个冠词就不正点books are the primary media of learning. Since the papermaking technology was originated in ancient china, books have accompanied people a long time. Mainly, people write books in the intention to with the intentions to 吧, 不过in order to 不是很好么pass knowledge from one generation to another. Books may contain all things of human and nature. With the development of publication industry, more and more books are issued from stream-of-consciousness novels to popular science readings about the black hole. Thanks to the books that we have not to depend on folklore to proceed our broad and profound cultures 有点怪异。。。。Due to the contribution of books, people do not ahve to depend on ..... Furthermore, experience is abstract and just useful individually. Usually, people should write down what the experience is to make it explicit and intelligible. Books embody knowledge rather than experience.






Second, as we see, not every person possesses the skill of summarizing knowledge from experience. Hence, students go to school study with their teachers' help. Learning is a gradual process. People should spend many years on the threshold of their lifetime learning the basic knowledge. I cannot image that people do not study the alphabet first. Experience, of course, support you special knowledge. But the foundation of your knowledge need make a systematic study from books. This is the requirement of your career. Moreover, people cannot afford to do something and opportunities are not available看不懂的说。。。. For instance, just astronauts have the chance to go outer space. Nevertheless, people can look at the pictures and description of the moon in books.  人称变化太多。。。不理想。 不过语言上是好了很多。  






Finally, people can read books whenever they want or have time to. People can also choice a nice place to read at ease. However, people who learn through experience may be not so satisfied. Although employees are currently required more experience eligible for their jobs, I agree with the books are more eventful for people to get knowledge.






In a word, books are recourse of knowledge. From children to adults, people all widen knowledge by reading books. Books make people intelligent and happy. Even though the popularization of computer and other electronic reading equipment I certainly believe books will continue to exist and play a significant role in people's life as they do before.


总的来说好了很多


加油啊



还是pp mm耐心。。。


学习ing。。

12#
发表于 2004-8-7 01:25:00 | 只看该作者

男生爱粉红色, 有点奇怪的说~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

偶要下雪, 偶们这里常年无雪................

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发表于 2004-8-7 02:02:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用pumpkin在2004-8-7 1:59:00的发言:


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这么大的雪花呀,岂不是可以挂在墙上了。。

建议bryony 采用。。

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-8-7 07:20:00 | 只看该作者

爱死你们了!

以下是引用pumpkin在2004-8-7 0:48:00的发言:



火气爆大, 找偶看你文章可以短信给偶吧, 给个连接偶更好找的啊



多谢enjoylife大哥(看花眼了?你本来就近视吗,还赖我~哎呀!掏戒尺了!逃呀!~哎呀,打哪不好打我的腚,疼疼!不敢了,不!敢了!),谢谢bryony大哥,还有pumpkin~


南瓜大姐头,我知道错了,下次一定发短信呼大家~


人家是小孩子吗~嗯~嗯~(一手拉拉南瓜衣角,一手揉揉被戒尺打疼了的pp,真够狠心的,往死里打的~)~


至于这个颜色吗~男孩子就不能用粉色的呀?为什么?~(再说人家也~)~


现在起用代码为:#00881B的绿色(既是基色为#00ff33,亮度为64)~


下雪好,瑞雪照丰年,南瓜地一定高产!哈哈~


指正的意见我看了,请你们就是管用的吗~猪猪的picture收下了~


谢谢~谢谢。



15#
发表于 2004-8-7 13:40:00 | 只看该作者

好热闹呀 哪里有KUIKUI哪里就有笑声

先给我点时间看看这篇大作吧

16#
发表于 2004-8-7 15:59:00 | 只看该作者

很热闹,有意思!

感觉kuikui的文章有点倒退了吗?写文章不用心吗,呵呵!

建议不要用粉色的啦,这年头粉色很让人浮想边篇的, 还是绿色的好,无污染又不伤眼!!

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发表于 2004-8-7 17:21:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用likui在2004-8-6 19:27:00的发言:







According to (because of 更好些)the limitations of books, it is true that people do not learn everything in(from) books. To some extent, people can learn knowledge from experience in their social activities and work. But in my opinion, that people enrich knowledge (learning)by reading books has more advantages in many ways. There are some reasons as follows.






First, the books are the primary media of learning. Since the papermaking technology was originated in ancient china, books have accompanied people(意思不对吧) a long time(应该是for a long time). Mainly, people write books in the intention to pass knowledge from one generation to another. Books may contain all things of human and nature. With the development of publication(应该是publishing) industry, more and more books are issued (we can read a wide variety of books )from stream-of-consciousness novels to popular science readings about the black hole. Thanks to the books that(应该去掉才对吧) we have not to (do not have to)depend on folklore to proceed ( 用develop合适些)our broad and profound cultures. Furthermore, experience is abstract and just useful individually( for individuals). Usually(这两句是因果关系 用 so 好些), people should write down what the experience is to make it explicit and intelligible. Books embody knowledge rather than experience. 最后一句不明白






Second, as we see, not every person possesses the skill of summarizing knowledge from experience. Hence, students go to school study with their teachers' help. Learning is a gradual process(和这段的主题无直接关系). People should spend many years on the threshold of their lifetime learning the basic knowledge. I cannot image that people do not study the alphabet first. Experience, of course, support you special knowledge. But the foundation of your knowledge need make a systematic study from books. This is the requirement of your career. Moreover, people cannot afford to do something and opportunities are not available. For instance, just astronauts have the chance to go outer space. Nevertheless, people can look at the pictures and description of the moon in books.  这一段如有时间,最好重写,着重强调从书本学习basic knowledge 的重要性






Finally, people can read books whenever they want or have time to( 多余). People can also choice(choose) a nice place to read at ease. However(By contrast), people who learn through experience may be not so satisfied(may not be able to enjoy the convenience). Although employees are currently required more experience eligible for their jobs, I agree with the books are more eventful(critical或者是vital) for people to get knowledge.






In a word, books are recourse (the primary resource)of knowledge. From children to adults, people all widen knowledge (widen their horizon)by reading books. Books make people intelligent and happy. Even though the popularization (in spite of the prevailing )of computer and other electronic reading equipment I certainly believe books will continue to exist and play a significant role in people's life as they do before.


又写完了一篇,大家帮忙给呀!


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发表于 2007-1-12 11:01:00 | 只看该作者

cute!

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