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paopao

11.   The growth of the railroads led to the abolition of local times, which was determined by when he sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing from city to city, and to the establishment of regional times.

(A) which was determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing which指代abolition错

(B) which was determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and which differed which指代abolition错/which重复

(C) which were determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing

(D) determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differed（E）表面上好，逻辑错

(E) determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing

In choice A, was is incorrect; the verb must be were to agree with times. （主谓不一致） Also, which becomes the subject of a compound verb that lacks parallelism: was determined…and differing. （？？？） In choice B, was is again incorrect, and the use of two which clauses is awkward. （笨拙） In choice C, which were determined…and differing is another faulty compound verb. （？？？） Choice D presents a false compound: determined is an adjective modifying local times and differed is the simple past tense of to differ. （不平行） Because they serve different grammatical functions, these words cannot be treated as parallel elements joined by and. Choice E is best: without which, determined and differing function not as verb elements but as parallel modifiers of local times. （平行） This question is very difficult.

which becomes the subject of a compound verb that lacks parallelism: was determined…and differing. （？？？）  In choice C, which were determined…and differing is another faulty compound verb. （？？？）

这两句OG为何说它们不平行 which were determined ...and (were ) differing 是平行的啊

虽然不如E简洁

谢谢

rhod

were determined里的were表达的是被动，were differing里表达的是过去进行时，两个were的功能不一样，所以不能省略。

就算补出了were, 由于时态语态都不一致，所以也是不对称的。

paopao

以下是引用rhod在2004-8-5 14:58:00的发言：

were determined里的were表达的是被动，were differing里表达的是过去进行时，两个were的功能不一样，所以不能省略。

就算补出了were, 由于时态语态都不一致，所以也是不对称的。

rhod, 这个能详细地讲讲吗 没明白啊 平行并不要求在从句主被动完全一致 因为这是根据句意判断的

谢谢

leeon

先假设C里differing和determined并列并公用were，那么后面一句话就变成了were differing from city to city；这里的过去进行时表示什么？用的不对吧，这里本来应该用现在分词表示主动、正在进行和持续的意思；还有会造成differing和were determined 对应的嫌疑。

rt316

如leeon所言，首先，were differing其实不合理，此外，从句子的结构来看，C的意图应该是想将which定从和differing现分两个定语结构作为平行使用，所以，从这个大结构来看，C显然是违背了平行原则的。

paopao

were differing from city to city为何不对

因为主句用的是一般过去时 所以这里只能用过去时态

表示过去正在进行的状态 所以只能用过去进行时

rt316

C读起来就是觉得不是很顺溜，rhod的解释看来是可取的，第一个were作被动+时态助动词，而第二个were，应该是时态助动词，两者功能不同。

rhod

stoneren兄已经帮我说了。

第一个were作被动+时态助动词，而第二个were，应该是时态助动词

我的意思就是"此were非那were".

paopao

谢谢 明白了

chouray

以下是引用paopao在2004-8-5 6:25:00的发言：

11.   The growth of the railroads led to the abolition of local times, which was determined by when he sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing from city to city, and to the establishment of regional times.

(A) which was determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing which指代abolition错

(B) which was determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and which differed which指代abolition错/which重复

(C) which were determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing

(D) determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differed（E）表面上好，逻辑错

(E) determined by when the sun reached the observer’s meridian and differing

In choice A, was is incorrect; the verb must be were to agree with times. （主谓不一致） Also, which becomes the subject of a compound verb that lacks parallelism: was determined…and differing. （？？？） In choice B, was is again incorrect, and the use of two which clauses is awkward. （笨拙） In choice C, which were determined…and differing is another faulty compound verb. （？？？） Choice D presents a false compound: determined is an adjective modifying local times and differed is the simple past tense of to differ. （不平行） Because they serve different grammatical functions, these words cannot be treated as parallel elements joined by and. Choice E is best: without which, determined and differing function not as verb elements but as parallel modifiers of local times. （平行） This question is very difficult.

which becomes the subject of a compound verb that lacks parallelism: was determined…and differing. （？？？）  In choice C, which were determined…and differing is another faulty compound verb. （？？？）

这两句OG为何说它们不平行 which were determined ...and (were ) differing 是平行的啊

虽然不如E简洁

谢谢

我覺得此處be determined和 differ變成在修飾前一句主詞The growth, 因為參照大全624 及大全626, 可以發現626 中 不可用depending,而必須要用who depend來修飾historians, 那為何此句的differring 可用來修飾times?

謝謝!