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topic:
Nowadays,food has become easier to prepare.Has this change improved the way people live?Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

   The disputable fact is that modern technologies really change the way we prepareing food,from shopping to cooking styles.
They improve our health and save our time on food so we can complete more meaningful things.

   The first clue that our food preparation became much more easier is that the way way shopping changed. Several decades
before,we may just have to go to community vegetable market and only get limited varietiesBut now with more convenient
traffic tools and logistics management products can be more concentrated.So there comes the supermarket. We can go to
supermarket to find every kind of foods we need. The less time we waste on purchasingthe more time we can spend on hiding
or other physical healthy sports.

 The second reason our diet way changed is that the measure used to cook changed quite fascinate. Ever since we begun to use
microwave ovens and electronic ovens,cooking is just easy protocol that we did every thing ordered. Food become more delicious
and cooking become safer.In my family,my mom is always sloth at cooking using gas,but since we got microwave
oven,she became great at cooking,because it is so easy to prepared all this ingredients together.

 Now we can see human is just higher mammal who really depends on delicious food. The modern technology miracles lead us
to new food preparation style which is much safer , more healthy,time-saving.

今天第二篇，指正一下吧

Topic
Somepeople prefer to live in a small town.others prefer to live in a big city.which place would you prefer to live in?use specific reasons and details to support your answer.





     As you can see,the siblings in one family may choose definitely different live style since they chosen different urban
size city. To me ,the international urban city can be more intriguing .The benefits far outweigh the disadvantages,a plethora
of advantages such as higher living standard,better college education,and medical treatments.

In my view,i grown up in a small city before my campus life. I got less resources than the others who raised in big urban
city. After i went into campus,i found i would had a wider vision if i were raised up in a big city. My classmate who comes
from shanghai or other international city is more competitive.So i will choose to live in a big city to let my children
possess more possibilities.

The after my graduation,i lived in shanghai for a while. All the entertainments here are copious either in physical or
mental. We can enjoy Picasso's drafts, Shakespeare's opera,even remote Chinese folk music. And the medication system
is far more outstanding than the rural place. Many folks had to come to city to cure chronic ailment. It is time-costing and expensive for them.

And as i have to live on my own, it is really much more profit-making area.Although many people complained
about the housing price pressure in big city,but it can be solved if you try hard to chase more profit..But
other public accommodation is irreplaceable .

    In summary, i will choose big city to live which can make my life more profit ,higher corporate ladder , venturesome
spirit and variety of life. As it goes,"Variety is the spice of one's life".

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