请牛人帮忙解释！

shyzuozuo

Theoddsareabout4to1 against surviving a takeover offer, and many business consultants therefore advise that a company’s first line of defense in eluding offers like these be to even refuseto take calls from likely corporate raiders.

(A) that a company’s first line of defense in eluding offers like these be to even refuse

(B) that a company’s first line of defense in eluding such offers be to refuse even

(C) a company defending itself against offers of this kind that, as a first line of defense, they should even refuse

(D) companies which are defending themselves against such an offer that, as a first line of defense, they should even refuse
(E) that the first line of defense for a company who is eluding offers like these is the refusal even


A,B选项的区别到底在哪？like这种用法哪里不对了？？

ruha88

如果一个词可以搞定的意思，就不要用短语。
offers like these 没有 such offers 简洁。
such是形容词，表这样的，指前文提到的takeover offer.

yeah529

A错误在于these这个词不能指代前面的句子，一般都是these+具体n.

顺便问问牛牛们，A、B里的even用法有没有什么问题？？？

vinbobo

A错误在于these这个词不能指代前面的句子，一般都是these+具体n.

顺便问问牛牛们，A、B里的even用法有没有什么问题？？？

-- by 会员 yeah529 (2011/11/7 15:46:31)

these的确不能单独指代，同时这里单复数也有问题
A的even也有问题
even按照逻辑意思是修饰后面的宾语的，而不是修饰动词