求口语高人路过指点一二，目标3分即可，这么说行吗

yuikawada

题目：What kind of activities you enjoy at school?

Among all of activities such as basketball, tennis, and swimming I’d love to enjoy playing chess. First, because chess isvery interesting and by taking part in the chess club, I make many great andnice friends. For example, I met Tom in a certain chess game when I was afreshman. At that time, I was to have participated in swimming club. But Tomand I both are crazy about playing chess and he had been taking part in theactivity for half a year. So finally I decided to take part in chess club. Second,I’m good at chess . If you’re good at something, you will prefer it more,right? Likewise, I had ever won a champion of campus chess competition when Iwas 18 year old. Above all, Only when do I participate this activity , I can enjoy the after-school time.

yuikawada

高人肯指点的，送12月康老师预测JJ付费版。 我真金白银买的，求助！！！