急问一个ESSAY的思路，非常感激！

andos

What legacy would you hope to leave as a xxx school graduate?

The adcom wants you to really evaluate what "fit" means to you for xxx school."Fit" is different for everyone, so we want to see how authentic and purposeful you are about applying.

请教各位这个论文是写什么？

cheesyheart

Your contribution to Johnson. Pretty straightforward. What can you bring to Johnson, and even the bigger Cornelll community?

andos

谢谢!

JonFrank

Hey there.  You should use this essay as your chance to talk about why you like the specific school—what unique things does it offer that suit YOUR background closely?  And then, talk about the unique clubs, activities, and events that you will take part in.  you will change a club for example, making it more interesting.  More unique.  Or you will launch a new contest, or improve the quality of the arts scene—you get the idea.  Find the unique aspects of the school that suit you, and show how you will make those things BETTER in your two years at the program.  And as always, try to be suuuper specific…

Jon Frank
Founder PrecisionEssay

poppyatlarge

楼上亮了。。。。