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在这里顺便做个总结，with/without在句中可以作定语也可以作状语，在with前部如果有动词结构时，优先考虑with作状语，修饰前最近的一个主谓结构，这里所指的主谓结构不一定是主句主语和主句谓语，因为更靠近with的完全有可能是子句的主语和动词。上述仅仅是个人的观点，希望大家作更多地验证。

kingsoft

      我认为如果A是这样：The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions without the aid of telephoto lenses.

     刨除其他问题，至少without的修饰没有问题。A本身的问题的不是我们前面讨论的with/without修饰原则，而是playing in trees 修饰lions，后面再接一个without短语，那么这个without短语修饰就有问题

      因为我们知道：名词+介词短语1+介词短语2这个结构是可行的，也就是说两个介词短语都是修饰名词的。而这里A用了这个结构，但是显然修饰有问题

      

kingsoft

    找到一个例子

   

1.        Although films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills, in reality these gregarious creatures live in stable groups that occupy the same territory for long periods.

(A) films about the American West depict coyotes as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills

(B) in films about the American West coyotes are depicted to be solitary animals that howl mournfully on the tops of distant hills

(C) coyotes are depicted as solitary animals howling mournfully on the tops of distant hills in films about the American West

(D) films about the American West depict coyotes as if they were solitary, mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills（A）

(E) films about the American West depict coyotes to be solitary and mournfully howling animals on the tops of distant hills

     比如C选项中，on the tops of distant hills in films 这样的修饰就是错误的！！！

kingsoft

        又找到一个例子，晕了。。。

        The failing of the book lies not in a lack of attention to scientific detail but in the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that reduce the credibility of the work.

         这个是对的。。。晕啊

         请NN总结

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以下是引用rt316在2004-7-21 1:49:00的发言：

在这里顺便做个总结，with/without在句中可以作定语也可以作状语，在with前部如果有动词结构时，优先考虑with作状语，修饰前最近的一个主谓结构，这里所指的主谓结构不一定是主句主语和主句谓语，因为更靠近with的完全有可能是子句的主语和动词。上述仅仅是个人的观点，希望大家作更多地验证。

同意rt316的观点, 只是没有权威的资料可以确认!