以下是引用paopao在2004-8-9 1:28:00的发言:狗狗 为何现分不是修饰大蘑菇啊 你能讲讲吗
Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago and that is extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.
你说的"大蘑菇"是a giant fungus吗??
首先我用roberta的例子来说, 两个that从句形式不对等, 在ETS上来说应该叫awkward, and non-parallel structure. 并不是说现分修饰fungus不好...
其次, 从(A)原句来看,
Scientists have recently discovered what could be the largest and oldest living organism on Earth, a giant fungus that is an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles spawned by a single fertilized spore some 10,000 years ago and extending for more than 30 acres in the soil of a Michigan forest.
其中的spawned 和 extending 都是修饰 an interwoven filigree of mushrooms and rootlike tentacles, 若是直接跳跃修饰a giant fungus, 个人觉得不妥.....况且that从句里面的修饰语是跳跃修饰that从句的先行词也是不妥... |