Season 2——manhattan 23（The author Herman Melville）

ropingmoon

The author Herman Melville and thepoet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature, greatly beloved by generations past and present.
作家HM和诗人WW是美国文学的标志，他们被现在和过去的一代代人爱戴着。
       A       The author Herman Melville and the poetWalt Whitman are icons
       B       Herman Melville the author and WaltWhitman the poet are icons
the author后置没有前置修饰清晰，是不是一个人的身份应该前置在人名前面?求指导。。。
       C       The author named Herman Melville and thepoet named Walt Whitman are great icons
unnecessary passive voice
       D      The author, Herman Melville, and the poet,Walt Whitman, are icons
逗号用在这里是不符合规定的把？容易引起语义混乱
       E       Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons
unnecessary past perfect tense

选A

UlysessHope

23. The author Herman Melville and thepoet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature, greatly beloved bygenerations past and present.
        A       The author Herman Melville and the poetWalt Whitman are icons
        B       Herman Melville the author and WaltWhitman the poet are icons
        C       The author named Herman Melville and thepoet named Walt Whitman are great icons
        D      The author, Herman Melville, and the poet,Walt Whitman, are icons
        E       Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons

-- by 会员 毛毛carina (2011/10/10 9:36:52)

选A
这题涉及到了职位称号与定冠词不定冠词的使用，其实根据这一点就排除BCDE了
若职位称号前没有冠词或有定冠词the，则省略逗号
若职位称号前有不定冠词，则逗号不省略（这些都是prep语法笔记讲的知识哇~~）
而且 C中great与greatly重复
        E中had时态不对

Jimmyzhang2012

选A 考点是关于同位语用法中的the和逗号
       B     不符合习惯表达的顺序
       C      named 累赘，great重复
       D      定冠词the+职位+人名 不加逗号；不定冠词才加
       E       过去完成时错误

听枫

23. The author Herman Melville and thepoet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature, greatly beloved by generations past and present.
        A       The author Herman Melville and the poetWalt Whitman are icons
        B       Herman Melville the author and WaltWhitman the poet are icons
        C       The author named Herman Melville and thepoet named Walt Whitman are great icons
        D      The author, Herman Melville, and the poet,Walt Whitman, are icons
        E       Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons

-- by 会员 毛毛carina (2011/10/10 9:36:52)

选A吧
B觉得很别扭，这样的结构感觉强调的是author和poet这两个职业而不是这两个人本身
C的这个被动的named完全没有必要而且也有改变句子重心的嫌疑，而且多的这个great也没有出现的理由
D句子更是不通顺了，非常别扭支离破碎的，第一个和第三个句号用法不当
E同D，而且也没有明显的标志标明需要用被动语态的过去时。

geniealice

选A



The名称+名字
and连接2个=》复数
beloved从句修饰icons

balapupu

The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature, greatly beloved by generations past and present.
       A       The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons—>R
       B       Herman Melville the author and Wal tWhitman the poet are icons—>头衔最好应该在前修饰。
       C       The author named Herman Melville and the poet named Walt Whitman are great icons—>named 冗余，great和后面的great重复.
       D      The author, Herman Melville, and the poet,Walt Whitman, are icons?and 前后不平行.
       E       Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons?had been 时态错

南瓜0729

23. The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature, greatly beloved by generations past and present.
       A       The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons
       B       Herman Melville the author and Wal tWhitman the poet are icons
       C       The author named Herman Melville and the poet named Walt Whitman are great icons
       D      The author, Herman Melville, and the poet,Walt Whitman, are icons
       E       Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons 时态错选A

maxiv

23. The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature, greatly beloved by generations past and present.

       A       The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons
同位语？

       B       Herman Melville the author and Wal tWhitman the poet are icons
Herman Melville the author 这叫什么修饰方式啊，给个逗号不行吗

       C       The author named Herman Melville and the poet named Walt Whitman are great icons
wordy

       D      The author, Herman Melville, and the poet,Walt Whitman, are icons
勉强对吧，总感觉同位语有点削弱。。。

       E       Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons
beloved是被动语态，不是过去式；所以had错


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学到的：
[tr]  [td=710]双逗号隔开的同位语，失去了对被修饰对象的restricted功能[/td][/tr]

maxiv

23. The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature, greatly beloved by generations past and present.
       A       The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons
       B       Herman Melville the author and Wal tWhitman the poet are icons
       C       The author named Herman Melville and the poet named Walt Whitman are great icons
       D      The author, Herman Melville, and the poet,Walt Whitman, are icons
       E       Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons

1，人名是对author和poet起限定作用的，所以不能放在author和poet前面，或者把author和
poet做同位语。BE错。
2，wordy，C错。
3，同位语修饰不起限定作用，D错。

正解A

zhitaochen

23. The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons of American literature, greatly beloved by generations past and present.
        A       The author Herman Melville and the poet Walt Whitman are icons
        B       Herman Melville the author and Wal tWhitman the poet are icons
        C       The author named Herman Melville and the poet named Walt Whitman are great icons
        D      The author, Herman Melville, and the poet,Walt Whitman, are icons
        E       Herman Melville, the author, and Walt Whitman, the poet, had been icons

MO: A