急求OG12-sc-105..A.E选项解释

trackofheart

105. Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A)    Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B)    In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C)    In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D)    Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E)    Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and


解释


A    the participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase; use of the present progressive form of the verb confuses the sequence of time with respect to the past tense of the main verb capitalized.


前面进行时的使用confuse后面过去时，这个解释是要解释什么啊。跟时态有什么关系啊？




E    the participial phrase does not clearly modify book illustrations; the relationships among the parts of the sentence are unclear.


E选项就是直接是 主语＋两个并列谓语coordinated和capitalized不就完了么，跟修饰又有什么关系啊？直接B coordinated them(指代前面的illusions) with。。。。这样不完了么？c选项还要整个定语从句在中间了，怎么不说它wordy。。akward了。


求指教。。谢谢

trackofheart

自己先顶下。。

trackofheart

5555。。。木有人咩？

Vanaron

是分词填在中间有修饰前后歧义的问题     这题我以前搞不明白 不过现在看看只有C意思表达最清楚了 虽然我那时疑惑的是B选项 但错点基本差不多
LZ可以参考http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-580966-1-1.html#15238664

trackofheart

是分词填在中间有修饰前后歧义的问题     这题我以前搞不明白 不过现在看看只有C意思表达最清楚了 虽然我那时疑惑的是B选项 但错点基本差不多
LZ可以参考http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-580966-1-1.html#15238664

-- by 会员 Vanaron (2011/10/4 21:29:12)

谢谢你的回复。
我想问e项为什么不可以就把coordinated看作和capitalized并列的一般过去时？

wtx2490467

原句结构中，COORDINATED并不是主句结构，所以改变原句结构和合理重心，如果按你这样说，划线部分就没啥作用了，划线部分的重要作用就是让你分清原句的结构和逻辑重点，

trackofheart

恩。。谢谢。。收到。。嘿嘿