Season 1——manhattan 17(sugar beet and walnut crops)(已结贴)

bbfcsak

哎呀我又来咆哮了。。。
17. Pests had destroyed grape, celery,chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
       A       Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chilipepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
       B       Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chilipepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
       C       Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chilipepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but more effectivepest-control methods that were introduced in the 1880s saved the citrusindustry.
       D      In the 1880s, pests destroyed grape, celery,chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region and more effectivepest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
       E       In the 1880s, more effective pest-controlmethods saved the citrus industry from what was destroying grape, celery, chilipepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region.

此题选B，原因请见下：
A，crops是统称，所以应该放在最后一个例子后面。其余的没错。以我以前中学时做选择题的方法判断也可以排除这个选项，5个选项中就A这个是把crops放在辣椒后面的。直接咔嚓掉。
C，that were多余繁杂， in the 1880s位置变化导致修饰了methods，曲解了原句的意思，再之被动语态不佳，而且添加新动词introduced更加造成繁杂~
D， 最重要的错误是把but改成了and，由转折变并列，这是不对的，而且把 in the 1880s提到句首，说明了pests destroyed grape, celery等等是和methods saved the citrus industry是同一年发生的，曲解的原句的意思。
E， in the 1880s的错误类似D，并且整个句子直接把pests删除了，改成了what，what可以是天气，人为因素，也可以是fruit ninja，并不一定是pests，所以擅自改变词容易造成语义无解。并且这里的过去进行时使用别扭，说的好像是方法救了橘子的同时XXX因素正在破坏其他的水果。


所以B是最好的选项。


总结，随意加词或者改词都会造成语义误解，随意的改变短语位置也会造成语义误解。所以做题的时候要想：作者的原意是啥。


OK~码字完毕，欢迎吐槽拍砖献爱！！！

ropingmoon

17. Pests had destroyed grape, celery,chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
        A       Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chilipepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
        B       Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chilipepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
        C       Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chilipepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but more effectivepest-control methods that were introduced in the 1880s saved the citrusindustry.
        D      In the 1880s, pests destroyed grape, celery,chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region and more effectivepest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
        E       In the 1880s, more effective pest-controlmethods saved the citrus industry from what was destroying grape, celery, chilipepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region.

-- by 会员 毛毛carina (2011/9/19 9:29:43)

哇咔咔~~才看到，亲爱的斑竹啊，这个怎么不在置顶帖里面。。。我以为昨儿没更新。。。嘿嘿~~还好赶上了

句子的意思是：害虫毒害了本地区的葡萄，芹菜，红辣椒，甜菜还有核桃各种作物，80年代的时候，一种更高效的杀虫剂拯救了整个果品产业。


A选项里面，我觉得crops应该是个总称，应该放在所有菜名的后面类似于概括性名词
C选项里面，擅自加了一个 introduced in the 1880s ,原文里面没有表达这种杀虫剂是1880s引进的哇~篡改句意，格杀勿论！！
D选项里面，肿么能使and呢。。。明明是转折的语气
E选项里面，特意确认了一下，save from意思是免遭于，免于，那么后面就应该跟类似于什么“害虫侵扰”神马的了~~~不能是被害的菜菜们了


所以应该是B，首先crops位置正确，起到所有作物的概括性总结；然后but表转折语气，使用恰当；最后整个句意表达清晰，简明完整~~~
恩恩，就它了！！

sarah_kim

选B

balapupu

17. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
A. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.--》还有chili pepper 味的crops?不对~
B. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.--》R
C. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but more effective pest-control methods that were introduced in the 1880s saved the citrus industry.--》时间状语位置容易造成歧义。
D. In the 1880s, pests destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region and more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.-》并列改变原句意思，并且时间状语意思改变。木有时间对比的含义，第一句应该是过去完成时
E. In the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry from what was destroying grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region.--》同D

maxiv

17. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.

A. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
    but in the 1880s,修饰后半句。使得前半句没有了时间限定，had就很奇怪了不知道到何时结束

B. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
    but in the 1880s,修饰后半句。使得前半句没有了时间限定，had就很奇怪了不知道到何时结束

C. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but more effective pest-control methods that were introduced in the 1880s saved the citrus industry.
    没有证据说明control methods是1880s才introduced的

D. In the 1880s, pests destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region and more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
    and前后不平行

E. In the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry from what was destroying grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region.
    对

南瓜0729

17. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
A. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
B. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
C. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but more effective pest-control methods that were introduced in the 1880s saved the citrus industry.  不简洁
D. In the 1880s, pests destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region and more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
E. In the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry from what was destroying grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region.
DE 没有转折的意思了 排除
选B

maxiv

17. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
A. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper crops, sugar beet and walnut in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
B. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
C. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but more effective pest-control methods that were introduced in the 1880s saved the citrus industry.
D. In the 1880s, pests destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region and more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
E. In the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry from what was destroying grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region.

1，crops放置位置错，导致平行问题。A错。
2，没有证据证明introduced是在1880s发生的，C错。
3，destroy不一定发生在1880s，D错。
4，and 前后不平行。D错
5，what一般不做代词。E错（勉强算的）

B正解

zhitaochen

MO: B

B. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but in the 1880s, more effective pest-control methods saved the citrus industry.
C. Pests had destroyed grape, celery, chili pepper, sugar beet and walnut crops in the region, but more effective pest-control methods that were introduced in the 1880s saved the citrus industry.