OG12 -112 依旧有问题...

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3． As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(A) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision, it would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind if it were an adult with such vision.
(B) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500, or legally blind as an adult.
(C) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision would be rated about 20/500; qualifying it to be legally blind if an adult.
(D) A baby emerges from the darkness of the womb with a rudimentary sense of vision that would be rated about 20/500; an adult with such vision would be deemed legally blind.（D）
(E) As a baby emerges from the darkness of the womb, its rudimentary sense of vision, which would deemed legally blind for an adult, would be rated about 20/500.

我在坛子里面搜了以前关于这个的解释，我发现还是没有我想问的问题类型。
我觉得这道题目的逻辑是，当一个婴儿从子宫中的黑暗中出生，小孩子的视觉被评为20/500；大人如果是这样的视觉的话就会被认为是瞎子。
那么也就说这个句子前半部分的重心是 小孩子的这个视觉被评为20/500咯，可是D选项明显前半部分的句子的重点是 a baby emerges from...而关于视觉这一点用了个with的短语就解决额..可是这个不是句子想要表达的意思呀....貌似重点关注不对呀...
再来说说E选项，貌似也不对哦，首先应该是would be deemed blind 对么 ？其次，不能说视觉是瞎子，只能说人是瞎的对么？ 可是OG给的解释让我有点小莫名，which指代awkward。a of b这样的情况后面跟which指代正确的很多呀，总不能说这个which 可能指代sense 又可能指代vision吧？
求NN 解答呀
谢谢了 小女子万分感谢~

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fdrandom

考个逻辑搭配，vision不能blind，person才能blind，所以A、B、E都错了

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考个逻辑搭配，vision不能blind，person才能blind，所以A、B、E都错了

-- by 会员 fdrandom (2011/9/9 15:59:12)

这个我已经在上面的分析上说到了...E我也晓得存在这些问题 我是对OG的解释有以为  还有我觉得D的逻辑重点也是有问题的呀.. 所以才求教的...不是单纯的问为什么选D  不过谢谢了哦

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bravo6

从句子行量的方面来入手吧，并列句行量最大，所以在传递信息较多的时候，尤其是这种全部划线的题目尽量使用并列句

deityc

我觉得 E那个解释的意思是 which 那句话有问题，而不是特意说which 指代有问题；我觉得which这句话应该是放在 最后的应该先说视力是20/500,然后再说会被认为是盲人。E选项直接将后边这句话变为了主语的非限定修饰，打破了逻辑关系，所以会有问题

deityc

当然 would 后面也少个Be， 而且我一直觉得 would be deemed legally blind for an adult很别扭