At an orientation meeting, the travelers were told that a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever would be needed by each of them.
At an orientation meeting, the travelerswere told that a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation againsttyphoid fever would be needed by each of them. A a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever would be needed by each of them B they would need a visa, a landing card, and evidence of their being inoculated against typhoid fever C they would need evidence of being inoculated against typhoid fever and a visa and landing card D they would each need a visa, a landing card, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever E they would need visas, landing cards, and evidence of inoculation against typhoid fever for each of them
A用了被动语态,这个不如主动好。 B和C的of being inoculated不如inoculation简洁,A of B的结构放两个名词更顺畅。 E把for each of them放在句尾不好,离修饰对象they太远了,容易有歧义。 D的they would each,each做同位语,这是优选结构。