whereas出现在句中不用结构对称么？ GWD 第七套 39

鸡腿

GWD-9-Q39:
Over 75 percent of the energyproduced in France derivesfrom nuclear power, while in Germany
it is just over 33 percent.D有歧义，容易让人误解为法国的能量有33%来源于德国的核电厂
A.     while in Germany
it is just over 33percentB.     compared to Germany
, which uses just over 33percentC.     ! whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33percent of the energy produced in Germany
D.     whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comesfrom nuclear power in Germany
E.      compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany
,where it is just over 33 percent

答案c 选项中whereas 后面不用于前面结构对称么?

鸡腿

GWD-9-Q39:
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.
D有歧义，容易让人误解为法国的能量有33%来源于德国的核电厂
A.    while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B.    compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C.    ! whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D.    whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E.    compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent

AlohaDJ

whereas引导的从句不严格要求与主句结构平行对称。

鸡腿

Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
Whereas暗含对比，需要结构相同，功能相对，形式对称
A.    ！Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
B.    Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that
C.    Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes
D.    Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds
E.    Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes
 
那这道捏？？

bitieming

应该是不存在致命错误时，以平行为优，但不严格要求平行吧

清飞扬

GWD-9-Q39:
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.
D有歧义，容易让人误解为法国的能量有33%来源于德国的核电厂
A.    while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B.    compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent
C.    ! whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
D.    whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany
E.    compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent

-- by 会员 鸡腿 (2011/8/13 16:35:51)

A.    while in Germany it is just over 33 percent-----it指代不清楚，是nuclear power/energy
B.    compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent-------------比较根本不平行：能源><国家
C.    ! whereas nuclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany---------看清楚了！不仔细就会弄错的：左边energy produced in France ；右边 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany，平行大
D.    whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from nuclear power in Germany--------看清楚了！不仔细就会弄错的：左边energy produced in France ；右边  nuclear power in Germany （不平行了）trap你的！
E.    compared with the energy from nuclear power in Germany, where it is just over 33 percent--------it指代不清楚

清飞扬

Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes form a random pattern.
Whereas暗含对比，需要结构相同，功能相对，形式对称
A.    ！Whereas in mammals the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes---in mammals the tiny tubes ><in birds the tubes
B.    Whereas the tiny tubes for the conveying of nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in mammals in parallel lines, birds have tubes that------the tiny tubes ><birds不平行
C.    Unlike mammals, where the tiny tubes for conveying nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, birds’ tubes-------mamals><birds' tubes
D.    Unlike mammals, in whom the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells are arrayed in parallel lines, the tubes in birds-------mammals><the tubes 不平行
E.    Unlike the tiny tubes that convey nutrients to bone cells, which in mammals are arrayed in parallel lines, in birds the tubes---------the tiny tubes><in birds 不平行

那这道捏？？

-- by 会员 鸡腿 (2011/8/13 20:46:07)

清飞扬

OG P754/136解释 whereas introduces two contrasting situations or events and should be followed by parallel structures

鸡腿

恩恩。。谢谢大家啦。。哈哈

wangjieava23

谢谢各位对平行的解释了。