superbat呼叫斑主！OG Q105 关于代词、ing结构能否修饰介宾中的宾语

superbat28

纠结了一下还是选C了 答案是什么 我这台电脑上没有OG……

-- by 会员 塔罗牌 (2011/7/19 23:24:02)

选C选C~

superbat28

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

对于A选项，OG说：The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase. 但是我认为coordinating只能修饰BP吧，分词短语不是不可以修饰介宾短语中的宾语么？如OG 第一题C选项。

此外，关于代词。。OG没有提到关于them的问题，可是我想问：尽管对于代词指代貌似应该是遵循按逻辑意思来寻找的原则，可能就近指代，可能跳跃指代，可能指中心词什么的。但是，代词是不能指代介宾结构中的宾语的吧？这个想法对否？
若对，是不是该题A选项，包括其后有些选项，代词指代也有错误？

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/7/19 20:13:49)

在B选项有你说的这个问题，不过你还是呼唤一下版主吧

在A选项里，them是几乎不可能指代到一个能“去掉也不改变句意”的内容上去的。

-- by 会员 无敌可爱多 (2011/7/20 8:31:10)

斑主基本米有理过我……哈，我还得修炼内功~天天呼唤~！

无敌可爱多

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

对于A选项，OG说：The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase. 但是我认为coordinating只能修饰BP吧，分词短语不是不可以修饰介宾短语中的宾语么？如OG 第一题C选项。

此外，关于代词。。OG没有提到关于them的问题，可是我想问：尽管对于代词指代貌似应该是遵循按逻辑意思来寻找的原则，可能就近指代，可能跳跃指代，可能指中心词什么的。但是，代词是不能指代介宾结构中的宾语的吧？这个想法对否？
若对，是不是该题A选项，包括其后有些选项，代词指代也有错误？

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/7/19 20:13:49)

在B选项有你说的这个问题，不过你还是呼唤一下版主吧

在A选项里，them是几乎不可能指代到一个能“去掉也不改变句意”的内容上去的。

-- by 会员 无敌可爱多 (2011/7/20 8:31:10)

斑主基本米有理过我……哈，我还得修炼内功~天天呼唤~！

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/7/20 8:44:49)

建议你把标题改成：呼唤版主...另外在标题里面直接问代词能不能指代介宾结构宾语的问题。

superbat28

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

对于A选项，OG说：The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase. 但是我认为coordinating只能修饰BP吧，分词短语不是不可以修饰介宾短语中的宾语么？如OG 第一题C选项。

此外，关于代词。。OG没有提到关于them的问题，可是我想问：尽管对于代词指代貌似应该是遵循按逻辑意思来寻找的原则，可能就近指代，可能跳跃指代，可能指中心词什么的。但是，代词是不能指代介宾结构中的宾语的吧？这个想法对否？
若对，是不是该题A选项，包括其后有些选项，代词指代也有错误？

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/7/19 20:13:49)

在B选项有你说的这个问题，不过你还是呼唤一下版主吧

在A选项里，them是几乎不可能指代到一个能“去掉也不改变句意”的内容上去的。

-- by 会员 无敌可爱多 (2011/7/20 8:31:10)

斑主基本米有理过我……哈，我还得修炼内功~天天呼唤~！

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/7/20 8:44:49)

建议你把标题改成：呼唤版主...另外在标题里面直接问代词能不能指代介宾结构宾语的问题。

-- by 会员 无敌可爱多 (2011/7/20 8:55:35)

哇哈哈~over！

塔罗牌

capitalized肯定要离动作的发出者越近越好 所以肯定是BC中选 到底选哪个就再仔细读一下

superbat28

capitalized肯定要离动作的发出者越近越好 所以肯定是BC中选 到底选哪个就再仔细读一下

-- by 会员 塔罗牌 (2011/7/20 9:31:21)

那肯定是~可是我现在就是想知道那个分词ing形式到底能不能修饰一个介宾短语中的宾语。
像OG第一题，C选项全句是：The Glass HOuse Mountains in Queensland, Austrilia were sighted in 1770 by the English navigator Captain James Cook, naming them supposedly since their sheer wet rocks glistened like glass.
解释就是naming不能修饰JC，因为JC is the object of a preposition and not the subject of the clause。
所以，我就想知道B，那个coordinating，应该只能修饰BP，不能像OG所说修饰其之前的紧邻名词illustration吧？

superbat28

饭前up下~

superbat28

up啊！

aeoluseros

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

对于A选项，OG说：The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase. 但是我认为coordinating只能修饰BP吧，分词短语不是不可以修饰介宾短语中的宾语么？如OG 第一题C选项。

此外，关于代词。。OG没有提到关于them的问题，可是我想问：尽管对于代词指代貌似应该是遵循按逻辑意思来寻找的原则，可能就近指代，可能跳跃指代，可能指中心词什么的。但是，代词是不能指代介宾结构中的宾语的吧？这个想法对否？
若对，是不是该题A选项，包括其后有些选项，代词指代也有错误？

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/7/19 20:13:49)

"The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase. "的意思就是语法上无法修饰到book illustrations，而只能修饰BP，而且即便修饰BP，主谓之间夹了两个短语也是不好的，另外还有coordinate them也是错的，这个them无所指。我们在读句子的时候非限定性状语(即用逗号隔开的状语)永远都只是做一个场景提示，而不会作为重点词来看，对于只修饰核心成分(如主谓宾)的用逗号隔开的现在分词短语"carefully coordinating them with her narratives"是不会修饰到illustrations的。
代词是可以指代介宾结构中的宾语的，很常见。代词指代本质上是根据读者读得舒不舒服、能否立马理解指代对象来判断的，要是你读过去了，总觉得不知道指谁（前提是有好的语感），那么基本上这个介词有问题。GMAT正确句子里面的介词的指代都很明显，可以参看一下。

superbat28

Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B) In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C) In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D) Carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations
(E) Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and

对于A选项，OG说：The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase. 但是我认为coordinating只能修饰BP吧，分词短语不是不可以修饰介宾短语中的宾语么？如OG 第一题C选项。

此外，关于代词。。OG没有提到关于them的问题，可是我想问：尽管对于代词指代貌似应该是遵循按逻辑意思来寻找的原则，可能就近指代，可能跳跃指代，可能指中心词什么的。但是，代词是不能指代介宾结构中的宾语的吧？这个想法对否？
若对，是不是该题A选项，包括其后有些选项，代词指代也有错误？

-- by 会员 superbat28 (2011/7/19 20:13:49)

"The participial phrase does not clearly modify the noun in the preceding phrase. "的意思就是语法上无法修饰到book illustrations，而只能修饰BP，而且即便修饰BP，主谓之间夹了两个短语也是不好的，另外还有coordinate them也是错的，这个them无所指。我们在读句子的时候非限定性状语(即用逗号隔开的状语)永远都只是做一个场景提示，而不会作为重点词来看，对于只修饰核心成分(如主谓宾)的用逗号隔开的现在分词短语"carefully coordinating them with her narratives"是不会修饰到illustrations的。
代词是可以指代介宾结构中的宾语的，很常见。代词指代本质上是根据读者读得舒不舒服、能否立马理解指代对象来判断的，要是你读过去了，总觉得不知道指谁（前提是有好的语感），那么基本上这个介词有问题。GMAT正确句子里面的介词的指代都很明显，可以参看一下。

-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2011/7/22 13:07:28)

谢谢版主~
我想我应该是懂了~即这还是一个句子层次或者说是逻辑层次的问题，right？
像in her illustrations是一个插入语，对句子是补充的作用，所以重要的分词是不会修饰到这个插入语结构中去的，对吧？
In addition,分词和代词在这个问题上其实也是一样的，主要凭意思和逻辑来理解。我想最好的一个例子应该是Q98
Even though Clovis points, spear points with longitudinal grooves chipped onto their faces, have been found all over North America, they are named for the New Mexico site where they were first discovered in 1932.
这里的their是在次一层的插入语中，故只能指代spear points,而they是在主句中修饰Clovis points。

关于那个代词能否指代介词宾语的问题，我又翻了翻，好像是我之前对Q78 A选项的解释没理解对导致的~这个没有问题啦！

再次谢谢版主！