真実（しんじつ）は いつも一（ひと）つ！OG49(TEST部分） VS. OG59

ddbxyrj

49. As an actress and, more importantly, as a teacher of
acting, Stella Adler was one of the most influential
artists in the American theater, who trained several
generations of actors including Marlon Brando and
Robert De Niro.
(A) Stella Adler was one of the most influential
artists in the American theater, who trained
several generations of actors including
(B) Stella Adler, one of the most influential artists in
the American theater, trained several
generations of actors who include
(C) Stella Adler was one of the most influential
artists in the American theater, training several
generations of actors whose ranks included
(D) one of the most influential artists in the
American theater was Stella Adler, who trained
several generations of actors including
(E) one of the most influential artists in the
American theater, Stella Adler, trained several
generations of actors whose ranks included

59. The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the

pugnacious states of the Greek world in that a sacred

truce was proclaimed during the festival’s month.

(A) world in that a sacred truce was proclaimed

during the festival’s month

(B) world, proclaiming a sacred truce during the

festival’s month

(C) world when they proclaimed a sacred truce for

the festival month

(D) world, for a sacred truce was proclaimed during

the month of the festival

(E) world by proclamation of a sacred truce that

was for the month of the festival

答案分别是 C 和 D.
各位请看，以上第一题的C 中的 training 和以上第二题中的 B 中的 proclaiming 如果一起考虑， 既是 第二题可认知为word proclaim.........  和前面的 The Olympic Games 没有关系。 为什么不行呢？
官方解释以上第二题 B 选项落选的原因是proclaim的受受不清，但引用第一题的逻辑，落落大方啊；如果把第二题逻辑放在第一题那儿， theater 也可train了。还有一点，以上第一题中  including 落选的原因是指代不清，我认为是缺少一个逗号



吐槽：我做题凭语感较多，但在涉及句子结构时就要用到语法知识和逻辑判断，近来尤其纠结于定语从句、v.ed  v.ing、逗号三者之间那些关系中。哪位有相关的资料么，谢谢
         还是咱汉语表达简练，听起来耐人寻味啊。    如  今天我看到了一头囧囧的大河马，笑地很灿烂。

colasama

受受不清是什么意思？


个人觉得B不对是因为改变了句子逻辑关系

因为a sacred truce was proclaimed，所以The Olympic Games helped to keep peace among the pugnacious states of the Greek world
A的in that 和D的for都有一个很弱的因果关系。或者说是for引导的句子目的是解释前面的helped to keep peace 这也属于语感

courtdancer

第一题和第二题的区别在于第一题主句是be动词，第二题主句是实义动词
这两种情况下ing的用法是有区别的
先说第二题，这个我比较确定
在实义动词的情况下，ing最常用的方式是作为伴随状态——即ing的动作是主句动作发生的时候一并发生的，很明显，B选项中假如语法上proclaiming作为伴随状态的话其实语义是不对的，奥运会在keep peace的同时proclaim  a sacred truce？这两个本来就是一个事件啊，没有伴随不伴随的概念
我想这就是你所说的proclaim的修饰对象有误的意思了
关于第一题，我一开始选的是A，现在我也不是很同意解释里说的who放在theatre后面（当然who引导的是noun modifier，确实应该紧跟修饰语SA——详情参见Manhattan语法modifier那一章，但是who在theatre后面并不会引起歧义，因为who只能修饰人，必定能够跳过theatre修饰前面的人的）
后来读了一下发现也许who有修饰 most influential artists的歧义，因为其实who只是修饰SA这个人的，她培养出了马龙白兰度等人；至于解释里面说的第二部分，including的用法我表示我没懂正确选项的意思，不好意思

我的想法大概就是这样了

ddbxyrj

谢谢两位
in that 的确是可考虑因素
ho引导的是noun modifier，确实应该紧跟修饰语 也是