斑竹，此处有typo? OG 233

kiwii

233. Recently implemented "shift-work equations" based on studies of the human sleep cycle have reduced sickness, sleeping on the job, fatigue among shift workers, and have raised production efficiency in various industries.

(A)  fatigue among shift workers, and have raised

(B)  fatigue among shift workers, and raised

(C)  and fatigue among shift workers while raising

(D)  lowered fatigue among shift workers, and raised

(E)   and fatigue among shift workers was lowered while raising

The best answer, C, grammatically states that the equations... have reduced x, y, and i. and have raised efficiency. Choices A and B fail to use and to signal that fatigue among shift workers completes the series begun by have reduced, and so produce awkward and unclear sentences. Both D and E fail to use and to introduce the last item in the list, which is sleeping in these constructions. In E, while raising has no logical referent, producing only the absurd statement that fatigue has raised efficiency.

根据解释，C项应该是 and fatigue among shift workers, and have raised

不知是不是前人早已经说过的，见笑了

anyway, 如果是，下载版的文件应该改一下哦！

tianwan

没有错。while从句的主语和主句主语相同，可简化为while引导的分词结构。

kiwii

谢谢斑竹

zhuzhu1973

and fatigue among shift workers while raising

如果转成非省略说法,应该如何?

是否成为:and fatigue among shift worker while Recently implemented "shift-work equations" have raised ...

那么上面的while raising为什么不是while raised呢?

whoami2

帮zhuzhu1973顶。我也想知道这种主语相同的while从句转化成分词结构的规则。哪位大哥给点线索？

joe11

while  conj.  during the time that; when:

He fell asleep while (he was) doing his homework.

While (locked up) in prison, she wrote her first novel.

whoami2

谢谢joe11大哥！！！好像有点明白了

hyte

以下是引用tianwan在2004-6-26 11:46:00的发言：
没有错。while从句的主语和主句主语相同，可简化为while引导的分词结

我不是很同意～這裡用and連結have raised或許文法對！　但句意完全跟while raising不一樣！while隱含轉折的語氣！　跟and差很多

huangyh03

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maomao521

以下是引用joe11在2005-2-12 21:38:00的发言：

while  conj.  during the time that; when:

He fell asleep while (he was) doing his homework.

While (locked up) in prison, she wrote her first novel.

while后面是只要主语和时态与主句一致，就能省略，是么？