两个完整的句子应该怎么分开呢？ 逗号or连词？ 还是两个一起用？

jianaozhonghua

如题。
A.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women whowereborn in the country,by the time they reached adulthood，（独立修饰的两个成分必须，分开）had been attacked by the birds

某题目的一个错误选项，黄底地逗号是我加上去的  原句没有
被说成是两个完整句子需要，连接，请问是用连词and直接连接行么？
再问：  如果写成了  
98 percent of men and 75 percent of women who were born in the country, by the time they reached adulthood， and had been attacked by the birds
and 和 逗号一起是用 赘余么？

谢谢NN！！

jianaozhonghua

好像是要 逗号和连词一起用的  是么？  顶

若雪

如题。
A.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women whowereborn in the country,by the time they reached adulthood，（独立修饰的两个成分必须，分开）had been attacked by the birds

某题目的一个错误选项，黄底地逗号是我加上去的  原句没有
被说成是两个完整句子需要，连接，请问是用连词and直接连接行么？
再问：  如果写成了  
98 percent of men and 75 percent of women who were born in the country, by the time they reached adulthood， and had been attacked by the birds
and 和 逗号一起是用 赘余么？

谢谢NN！！

-- by 会员 jianaozhonghua (2011/6/15 1:39:31)

我觉得原句的意思应该是 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women had been attacked by the birds by the time they reached adulthood.
加了逗号和and之后LZ是想和什么并列么？

jianaozhonghua

如题。
A.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women whowereborn in the country,by the time they reached adulthood，（独立修饰的两个成分必须，分开）had been attacked by the birds

某题目的一个错误选项，黄底地逗号是我加上去的  原句没有
被说成是两个完整句子需要，连接，请问是用连词and直接连接行么？
再问：  如果写成了  
98 percent of men and 75 percent of women who were born in the country, by the time they reached adulthood， and had been attacked by the birds
and 和 逗号一起是用 赘余么？

谢谢NN！！

-- by 会员 jianaozhonghua (2011/6/15 1:39:31)

我觉得原句的意思应该是 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women had been attacked by the birds by the time they reached adulthood.
加了逗号和and之后LZ是想和什么并列么？

-- by 会员 若雪 (2011/6/15 7:56:26)

我好像看错题了，原题贴出来了，想问问E里面那个逗号为什么必须加，说是什么独立修饰成分必须分开，那么and分开行不行或者“，and”分开行不行？
恩，句子就是这个意思，成年之前都被鸟咬过

The first detailed study of magpie attacks in Australia indicates that by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds.

A.by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country havebeen attacked by the birds
B.by the time they reachadulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women, who were born in the country, had been attacked by the birds

C.by the time they reachedadulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country hadbeenattacked by the birds

D.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women thatwereborn in the country were attacked by the birds by the time they reach adulthood(C)

E.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women whowereborn in the country,by the time they reached adulthood，had been attacked by the birds


这是原题，答案是C


E的解释如下：
who were可以省略；adulthood后面少了逗号，错误，独立的修饰成分必须用两个逗号隔开；把by the time插在句子中间，显得很awkward。





who were可以省略；adulthood后面少了逗号，错误，独立的修饰成分必须用两个逗号隔开；把by the time插在句子中间，显得很awkward。

若雪

如题。
A.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women whowereborn in the country,by the time they reached adulthood，（独立修饰的两个成分必须，分开）had been attacked by the birds

某题目的一个错误选项，黄底地逗号是我加上去的  原句没有
被说成是两个完整句子需要，连接，请问是用连词and直接连接行么？
再问：  如果写成了  
98 percent of men and 75 percent of women who were born in the country, by the time they reached adulthood， and had been attacked by the birds
and 和 逗号一起是用 赘余么？

谢谢NN！！

-- by 会员 jianaozhonghua (2011/6/15 1:39:31)

我觉得原句的意思应该是 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women had been attacked by the birds by the time they reached adulthood.
加了逗号和and之后LZ是想和什么并列么？

-- by 会员 若雪 (2011/6/15 7:56:26)

我好像看错题了，原题贴出来了，想问问E里面那个逗号为什么必须加，说是什么独立修饰成分必须分开，那么and分开行不行或者“，and”分开行不行？
恩，句子就是这个意思，成年之前都被鸟咬过

The first detailed study of magpie attacks in Australia indicates that by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country have been attacked by the birds.

A.by the time they had reached adulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country havebeen attacked by the birds
B.by the time they reachadulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women, who were born in the country, had been attacked by the birds

C.by the time they reachedadulthood, 98 percent of men and 75 percent of women born in the country hadbeenattacked by the birds

D.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women thatwereborn in the country were attacked by the birds by the time they reach adulthood(C)

E.98 percent of men and 75 percent of women whowereborn in the country,by the time they reached adulthood，had been attacked by the birds


这是原题，答案是C


E的解释如下：
who were可以省略；adulthood后面少了逗号，错误，独立的修饰成分必须用两个逗号隔开；把by the time插在句子中间，显得很awkward。





who were可以省略；adulthood后面少了逗号，错误，独立的修饰成分必须用两个逗号隔开；把by the time插在句子中间，显得很awkward。

-- by 会员 jianaozhonghua (2011/6/15 8:47:29)

by the time they reached adulthood做修饰语修饰had been attacked.在这边叫做Modifier，一定要用两个逗号隔开。不能用，and也不能用and。不能只用一个逗号，哪边都不行，一定要两个一起用来隔开。
就像John, who is a genius, came yesterday一样。主要成分是john came yesterday.中间部分只是修饰。