请教GWD31-38 指代对象、语义重复问题 还有5天一战！请大家帮忙 ^ ^

caoyt

In1852 Robert Angus Smith published a detailed report of the chemistry of rain kin a large area around the city of Manchester, England, noting that the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic.

A.that the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic

B.that the city air became increasingly acidic the closer one came to town

C.that coming closer to town, the city air became increasingly acidic

D.that the more the city air became increasingly acidic, the closer one was to town

E.the city air becoming increasingly acidic as one would come closer to town

这题答案是A， 我选了C。我觉得A错误的理由是：one指代对象不清，且more 和increasingly有语义重复。
不知道大家是怎么做这道题的呢？ 请大家帮忙解答一下哦！

kikisunflower

记得前两天也有人Q这个题，当时还不知道kin是嘛意思，后来查了下（我根据wiki上的背景猜的）

of kin→be close to/be ralated to
the chemistry of rain kin→the chemistry close to rain→the chemistry of precipation 即降水化学（待验证= =||）

Back ground info from Wikipedia:
In 1872 Smith published the book Air and Rain: the Beginnings of a Chemical Climatology, which presents his studies of the chemistry of atmospheric precipitation

kikisunflower

枚举one前面可被其指代的名词：
Robert
report
chemistry
rain
area
city
没一个make sense。。。不知道one指代虾米。。。
不管了，就当是考the more...the more的搭配吧。。。

kikisunflower

选A的理由：
1、关于the more...the more...结构：
  前面一个the more是从句，后面一个the more是主句
  主句的内容随着从句内容的变化而变化，强调的是后面主句的内容，所以主句和从句的顺序是不能随便交换的；因此我认为BDE不妥，排除

2、然后剩下A和C：
   从时态上看，只有A最恰当：the closer X CAME, the more adj. WOULD BE
    C的时态是：X coming, the more adj. became，时态混乱

关于the more...the more...结构的时态，我觉得通常就这么4种：
1. the more A do, the more B do
2. the more A do, the more B will do
3. the more A did, the more B did
4. the more A did, the more B would do

jaze

枚举one前面可被其指代的名词：
Robert
report
chemistry
rain
area
city
没一个make sense。。。不知道one指代虾米。。。
不管了，就当是考the more...the more的搭配吧。。。

-- by 会员 kikisunflower (2011/5/11 20:39:38)

that the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic.

猪， 怎么来回跑哈， 吧你牵回家哈
这里的意思， 就是说  当一个人走的离城镇越近的时候， 就会发现越多的城市空气变的越酸
这句就是在讲那个家伙的的， 什么酸雨报告的， 大体就是这个意思哈
牵回家，把你，猪

kikisunflower

哦，对的，短路了，好吧好吧，你对的= =||

one就是指一个人的意思。。但是我关于report的说法也是对的。。

这个人做了个实验，研究降水里的化学物质，然后他发现，离城市越近，空气酸度越高。。。over

备注：
Not like "it, its, they, them ,their", the word "one" does not require an antecedent.

caoyt

哦！多谢楼上关于 the more..., the more这个句式的总结！
看来从时态上的搭配就可以排除C了~

caoyt

枚举one前面可被其指代的名词：
Robert
report
chemistry
rain
area
city
没一个make sense。。。不知道one指代虾米。。。
不管了，就当是考the more...the more的搭配吧。。。

-- by 会员 kikisunflower (2011/5/11 20:39:38)

that the closer one came to town, the more the city air would become increasingly acidic.

猪， 怎么来回跑哈， 吧你牵回家哈
这里的意思， 就是说  当一个人走的离城镇越近的时候， 就会发现越多的城市空气变的越酸
这句就是在讲那个家伙的的， 什么酸雨报告的， 大体就是这个意思哈
牵回家，把你，猪

-- by 会员 jaze (2011/5/11 21:12:50)

one在这里的用法感觉很特殊啊！！！呵呵！

egwucj

但是 the more。。。会不会和increasingly重复啊

caoyt

但是 the more。。。会不会和increasingly重复啊

-- by 会员 egwucj (2011/5/12 21:58:06)

我也感觉more 与 increasingly在语义上有重复！ 求NN指点啊！