以下是引用kevin_ws在2004-6-8 11:15:00的发言:Like the grassy fields and old pastures that the upland sandpiper needs for feeding and nesting when it returns in May after wintering in the Argentine Pampas, the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in farming practices.
A. the sandpipers vanishing in the northeastern United States is a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
B. the bird itself is vanishing in the northeastern United States as a result of residential and industrial development and of changes in
C. that the birds themselves are vanishing in the northeastern United States is due to residential and industrial development and changes to
D. in the northeastern United States, sandpipers’ vanishing is due to residential and industrial development and to changes in
E. in the northeastern United States, the sandpipers’ vanishing, a result of residential and industrial development and changing
综合一下:
(B) like the grassy fields and old pastures (are vanishing...), the bird itself is vanishing ...对称
(A) the sandpipers ....is a result of....主谓不一致 逻辑意思也不对 平行对称倒没什么问题
(C) 主语从句that....不平行 changes to 的介词to 用得不对
(D)不平行: the grassy fields and old pastures 与 vanishing
且把in the northeastern United States放前面易产生歧义
(E)把in the northeastern United States放前面易产生歧义,不平行,且完全是个断句
考试的时候可不能这样一句一句分析啊  |