og12 第12题 when为什么不行？

jiaying52

12.Rising inventories, when unaccompanied
correspondingly by increases in sales, can lead
to production cutbacks that would hamper
economic growth.
(A) when unaccompanied correspondingly by
increases in sales, can lead
(B) when not accompanied by corresponding
increases in sales, possibly leads
(C) when they were unaccompanied by
corresponding sales increases, can lead
(D) if not accompanied by correspondingly
increased sales, possibly leads
(E) if not accompanied by corresponding increases
in sales, can lead

Th e modifying phrase when … sales is needlessly
di?   cult to understand. 不明白when为什么很难理解，不可以当作状语吗？

steve_chem

这里我觉得用条件从句更好，因为时间的概念不强烈。。而且unaccompanied with 听起来也不地道。排除AC  再根据agreement排除B D   就得到了E

jiaying52

这里我觉得用条件从句更好，因为时间的概念不强烈。。而且unaccompanied with 听起来也不地道。排除AC  再根据agreement排除B D   就得到了E

-- by 会员 steve_chem (2011/4/23 8:40:50)

哈哈，谢谢，觉得你语感蛮强的。读几遍的确觉得unaccompanied怪怪的！
弱弱地问一句，unaccompanied和not accompanied除了语感外还有什么不同吗？有没有什么标准什么的？

jeanq

其实我觉得when 和if没差 主要是ABC都有致命错误
(A) when unaccompanied correspondingly by ncreases in sales, can lead
应该是corrsponding increases  如果只是一个泛泛的increases不能抵消 是相应的增长
(B) when not accompanied by corresponding increases in sales, possibly leads
leads错
(C) when they were unaccompanied by corresponding sales increases, can lead
corresponding sales increases 表达不清晰