长难句，感觉缺少连词！！NN们请进……

格斗

NN们进来，杨鹏长难句有几个关于连词的问题！！谢谢
杨鹏长难句

下面两句话是不是缺连词啊？



1.The nonstarters were considered the ones who wanted stability, a strong referee to give them some position in the race, a regulative hand to calm manic speculation（后两个省略了‘who wanted’，这三个并列成分间是不是少连词啊？逗号不能单独连接句子吧）; an authority that can call things to a halt, begin things again from compensationarily staggered "starting lines."（动词begin前又不是插入语，干嘛用逗号呢？）（lines后面的句号应该放在引号外面吧？）

补充：分号的用法不太理解，是因为前面的并列成分已经使用了逗号的原因么？



2.We have no pride in our growing interdependence, in the fact that our system can serve others, that we are able to help those in need(我认为并列成分间同样缺少连词); empty boasts from the past make us ashamed of our present achievements, make us try to forget or deny them, move away from them.（三个动词居然不用连词连接！！）

格斗

来人啊
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wudiyeah

阅读里边的语法错误多了去了。。。还有逻辑的也是

格斗

难道真的是错了。。。？？