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Topic: some people think that we should focus on the earth while other people think we should pay more attention on the out space exploration, what do you think?

With the developing of the out space exploration, more and more countries are now investigating large amount of money into this area. However, I still think that we should focus on the planet where we live.

The out space exploration is a huge project that would cost a lot of money. For everywhere we look: from the rocket to the different parts of the airship, from the fuel to the precisely instruments. Nothing is a piece of cake for the scientists to deliberate and produce. The process will not only cost time, energy, technology but also the money. To most countries, that’s a national project which would be large part of the national budget.

The other reason why I do not agree to spend a lot of money on the out space exploration is because there are still so many works need to be down on the earth. The money for the exploration comes from the tax-payers. But when we look around the world, there are still many people dying of starvation, disease, polluted air and dirty water. If we spent more money on these aspects, the social welfare would be increase. And most people can benefit from it in a short period of time. On the contrast, the out space exploration is not only costly but also full of risks.

At last, without a firmly base on the earth, we can’t go any further on the road of exploring the out space. The aerospace research is a large project. If the country is not rich enough to hold the task but step into this area, the huge fees will make the people’s living condition fall.

So I strongly recommend the government to pay more attention on the earth.