平行问题

jbc88

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Ranked among great mathematical scientists such as Archimedes, Kepler, and Newton, Abu Ali
al-Hasan ibn al-Haytham, who was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., had experimented extensively with light
and vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and also the notion of science being based on
experiment as well as on philosophical arguments.




(A) al-Haytham, who was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., had experimented extensively with light and
vision, laying the foundation for modern optics and also the notion of science being based on
experiment as well as
(B) al-Haytham, born in Iraq in 965 C.E., experimented extensively with light and vision, laying the
foundation for modern optics and for the notion that science should be based on experiment as well
as
(C) al-Haytham, born in Iraq in 965 C.E. and who experimented extensively with light and vision,
thereby laid the foundation for modern optics and also for the notion that science should be based
on not only experiment but also
(D) al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E. and had experimented extensively with light and vision,
laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion that science should be based on not only
experiment but also
(E) al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E., experimenting extensively with light and vision and
laying the foundation for modern optics and for the notion of science being based on experiment as
well as










PREP解释：


A. 过去完成时态had experimented使用错误；the notion of的用法不如the notion that的用法精确。
B. 正确。
C. 句子没有谓语；thereby是副词，不能连接句子；who experimented, thereby laid中间缺连词；
not only…but also与介词搭配的用法错误。可以是on not only x but also y, 或者not only on x but
also on y。
D. 过去完成时态had experimented使用错误；not only…but also与介词搭配的用法错误
E. 改变了句子的重心，主句变成：Abu Ali al-Hasan ibn al-Haytham was born in Iraq in 965 C.E.. 原
句的实义谓语动词成为辅助性的修饰成分。the notion of的用法不如the notion that的用法精确。



B选项。。难道born和experimented之中不用and连接么？

jbc88

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stellina

B中的born是作为修饰的，（who was）born in Iraq，而且就算要平行的话也不能是born和experimented平行啊，应该是was born and experimented。。。

melvinperson

这题我当时大概看了五分钟 觉得没一个是对的

jbc88

B中的born是作为修饰的，（who was）born in Iraq，而且就算要平行的话也不能是born和experimented平行啊，应该是was born and experimented。。。

-- by 会员 stellina (2010/12/10 15:51:02)

为啥我觉得你在说我的理由。。一头雾水。。

tuscan

born其实是一个插入语，用逗连接就可以了，并没有跟experiment产生任何并列关系