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Some people say that physical exercise shouldbe a required part of every school day. Other people believe that studentsshould spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do youagree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
           
Views differ considerably when it comes tothe issue of whether students should spend the whole school day on academic studies,on the other words, students should only focus on the academic studies andignore any other subjects such as the subject of exercise. Some people believethat students should try their best to learn academic studies such as math orforeign language, because theirs goal are going to the better school in thefuture, and it is waste time to take the physical exercise in school time everyday.On the other hand, others asset that students need the physical exercise inschool time, because the most important point is student’s health but rather isthe student’s grade. Both of the opposite arguments appear to be somewhatconvincing and stand to reason. But, my personal experience and actualobservations of life have led me to conclude that students should take physicalexercise everyday in school time. The following are reasons why.

First of all, it make not different fromresult that students spend time that could change their grade from good to bad.Let me put it on this way. Some people reject to spend time on physicalexercise because they think the time they save from the physical exercise canbe used to learn more academic studies; however, I don’t believe that can helpstudents’ knowledge boarder. Efficiency is more important to learn studies thanspending a lot of time. I think the purpose of physical exercise is that it canrelease students’ pressure and make their brain absorb more fresh air;therefore, they learn studies in the class more efficiency.    

Second, students can benefit from physicalexercise. For instance, some children are more willing to attain to schoolbecause of exercise class. Not all students love study for a whole day inschool. They are eager to play basketball or play soccer with their friends inschool. If school removes the exercise time, some children will not go to school,because they find that there is no interesting thing in school live. We shouldprotect some students’ right for playing game with their friends. If I werestudent, I would have consisted that I want to take the physical exercise.

However, people who hold different opinionmay argue that adult will be worried that students feel tired after playingbasketball and they will be not interested in studying. Of course, it may betrue that children will pay too much passion in outside activities and theywill fail to have good grades in their exams.
In fact, the thing is not always only onechoice. What if children have four days a week and the teacher can use one dayto finish his class when the exam day is coming. This situation will solveeasily. Teachers’ and parents’ thinking should be more feasible.      
In conclusion, given the reasons describedabove, when the advantages and disadvantages of whether students should spendthe whole day in academic studies are carefully compared, the most strikingview is obvious. It may be safe to arrive the conclusion that teachers andparents should support that children need some outside activities everyday.
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