og263请教

zhoushao

以下是引用而今迈步从头越在2005-4-24 11:56:00的发言：

and 前后两句得主谓都是存在得啊--2个独立的句子

and不能直接连接2个独立的句子。

为什么呢，连词是可以链接两个独立得句子得啊

连词是连接单词，短语，从句，分句，或是句子得一种虚词－－－薄冰语法书上说得

反而我觉得run-on恰是指那种没有链接词得两个句子

连词链接两个句子还有一题就是

OG-175

175. Two new studies indicate that many people become obese more due to the fact that their bodies burn calories too slowly than overeating.

(A) due to the fact that their bodies burn calories too slowly than overeating

(B) due to their bodies burning calories too slowly than to eating too much

(C) because their bodies burn calories too slowly than that they are overeaters

(D) because their bodies burn calories too slowly than because they eat too much（D）

(E) because of their bodies burning calories too slowly than because of their eating too much

只是还有一种说法就是要是链接两个独立得句子，and前需要逗号，可是这好像不是run-on得说法

Avantasia

上面的题目是连接的两个原因状语从句, 不是独立的从句, 这个不是Run-on的范围.

zhoushao

以下是引用Avantasia在2005-4-24 16:42:00的发言：
上面的题目是连接的两个原因状语从句, 不是独立的从句, 这个不是Run-on的范围.

我问的是为啥og-263对B项解释为run-on呢

以下是引用wwwhahchn在2004-12-3 20:35:00的发言：

Choice B also uses resulted ungrammatically and produces a run-on sentence (In A.D. 391, the destroying... resulted and later generations lost).

Avantasia

这里连接的是两个分句, 且主语不同, 第一句动词是resulted, 第二句是lost.

zhoushao

讨论来讨论去，原来是对run-on没有理解到位，摘自郎曼

run-on sentence noun

especially American English a sentence that has two main clauses without connecting words or correct punctuation

也就是说，没有正确得标点也算run-on,sign...

weichenli

zhoushao great thanks!!! such an NN

jjll

那这句也算run on咯？I am reading book and he is watching TV.

jjll

up!请NN回答。

milanforever

choice D: "of the library at Alexandria, the largest of the ancient world, "

这里the largest of the ancient world作同位语修饰the library. The library 是前面名词短语中的中心词。从这题，可以看出，同位语也可以跳跃修饰，和which/that/who引导的定语从句跳跃修饰一样，修饰前面的中心词。

bigtone

用google可以找到好多“"the largest destruction"”的例子，可能只能按照D比其他好来看了。另外B的run-on确实让人费解，幸好它好有表达不清的毛病，个人不认为and前要加逗号，一定要加嘛？