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发表于 2010-8-13 16:11:29 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
while depressed property values can hurt some large investors,they are potentially devastating for homeownwes,whose equity -in many cases representing a life's savings-can plunge or even disappear.
A  they are potentially devastating for homeowners ,whose
B  they can potentially devastate homeowners in that their
C  for homeowners,they are potentially devastating,because their
D  for homeowners,it is potentiallydevastating in that their
E  it can potentially devastate homeowners,whose

OG上说答案B“ can potentially" is redundant,  ”in that their" is wordy,awkward and ambiguous.为什么啊,为什么啊,不明白。
到底怎么样才算 wordy awkward ambiguous啊
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2010-8-13 21:59:23 | 只看该作者
有没有大侠来回答一下呀
板凳
发表于 2012-4-19 15:59:56 | 只看该作者
can 和 potentially 都是表示可能性,两个都用重复。
their 这里应该跟前面的they 指代一致,那就都是指代values,但句意应是指代homeowners。
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