BIMBA 和CEIBS的就业报告

基督山王爵

Is that because this thread is a old one?

The salary is not as high as I imaged

-- by 会员 gina2012 (2012/4/17 23:29:39)

老兄，你能不能用中文写呀。你的英文读起来实在是......

-- by 会员 星星点灯2010 (2012/4/18 22:26:03)

Well, this is why I should keep practising my english then.

i do not mind if you could make some corrections over my sentences.

much appreciate your time, honestly.

-- by 会员 gina2012 (2012/4/19 21:41:47)

省略主语，开头不大写，这是练习？

gina2012

LS,

Agree ur point

I have very bad habbit when i chatting on line. Very lazy.

星星点灯2010

Is that because this thread is a old one?

The salary is not as high as I imaged

-- by 会员 gina2012 (2012/4/17 23:29:39)

老兄，你能不能用中文写呀。你的英文读起来实在是......

-- by 会员 星星点灯2010 (2012/4/18 22:26:03)

Well, this is why I should keep practising my english then.

i do not mind if you could make some corrections over my sentences.

much appreciate your time, honestly.

-- by 会员 gina2012 (2012/4/19 21:41:47)

你是不是平时没机会练习你的英语，要跑到这里来练习？要学英语，转到GMAT版吧。

gina2012

emmm, no

But, apart from I shoud use 'an' instead 'a'

i do not see any grammar mistakes from my sentences

聪明的小帅哥

emmm, no

But, apart from I shoud use 'an' instead 'a'

i do not see any grammar mistakes from my sentences

-- by 会员 gina2012 (2012/4/19 22:54:57)

Yeah, right, "when I chatting online". CD真是越来越欢乐了。

gina2012

emmm, no

But, apart from I shoud use 'an' instead 'a'

i do not see any grammar mistakes from my sentences

-- by 会员 gina2012 (2012/4/19 22:54:57)

Yeah, right, "when I chatting online". CD真是越来越欢乐了。

-- by 会员 聪明的小帅哥 (2012/4/19 23:07:32)

Alrite, I meant this two sentences

Is that because this thread is a old one?

The salary is not as high as I imaged.

Well, I do see your point.

聪明的小帅哥

LS,

Agree ur point

I have very bad habbit when i chatting on line. Very lazy.

-- by 会员 gina2012 (2012/4/19 21:54:57)

要按GMAT的语法规则，上面这句至少3个语法错误加1个拼写错误。这都没什么。可是有的人牙缝明明有条菜，别人好心指出来，他抠了几下没发现，反正自己也看不见。的确，牙缝有条菜既不影响说话，也不影响信息传达。随便吧。

gina2012

To bolan

Thank you, that is unexpected.

To 聪明的小帅哥

I did not disagree with you. Let me rephrase my point.

I do think I need improve my English. I have very casual and careless writing.

As I pointed earlier, I need write as much as I can to help myself to build a rigid grammar system. And you are welcome to point out my mistakes.

Thank you.

liluyunismax

"Is that because this thread is a old one?   1. 后面的is 去掉； 2. a->an

The salary is not as high as I imaged."        3. not as...as -> not so ... as

我看到这几个问题。请牛人进一步斧正。