已经相当完美的作文啦！！不可能还有人能找出缺点吧？！

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题目是“外出旅游你选择单独一人，还是结伴同行”，我选的结伴同行～（个人语法不是太好，可能有些语法错误，还望各位大牛指出！小弟万分感谢！！～）








“Happiness only real when shared" is an old cliche, but I agree with it. For the same reason, I would surely prefer to travel with friends rather than go somewhere alone. Because accompanied with another people during your touring will drive your loneness alway and make your journey more delightful. In addition, it would be more safe and money saving, if you choose to travel with friends.


Initially, it is always top of the list of my viewpoints that having a journey with other people will make your travel experience more colorful and enjoyable than just going by yourself. Take myself as an illustration, I went to Japan with the friends of my high school room-mates last year. Actually, I didn't want to make a traveling with the destination in Japan originally, since I had been to Japan and had a "lonely trip" due to the flight-transferation three years ago. However, I never regret about the traveling in Japan last year, because the communication during the trip with my friends and the feeling of sharing experience together, no matter happy or tired, made the whole journey amazing and, to my surprise, all these are the things I couldn't find from the previous traveling. Although still some people like touring just by themselves, I would definitely prefer going with others. because I believe that creating a sharing happy memory with other people will be more unforgettable and wonderful than just having something all to yourself.


What is more, the additional security of accompanied touring also provides adequate justification for my position. There is no doubt that traveling with others will be more safer than going somewhere alone. According to a research on traveling accidents carried out in 10 major interesting places throughout the world, among 1000 cases of accidents, the ones which caused death due to lacking help from others account for virtually 70 percent of the total. No one can deny the truth behind the number. Indeed, since the situation you may encountered with during the journey is unpredictable, it is always a wise choice to accompanied with other people.


In addition, An equally essential factor which deserves people's attention is that having a trip with your friends may decrease the costs to a large degree. To make my demonstration more profoundly and comprehensively, I would like to cite what Ｇeorge Washington, one of my favorable celebrities, has mentioned, " Please, use your money temperately and wisely, because no body has inexhaustible property." Undoubtedly, having a nice traveling doesn't mean spending a lot of money. Since you are a group of people, there usually will offer some kind of discounts and economic tickets to attract many tourists.


Consequently, all the analysis warrants a just conclusion that traveling with other people must be a wonderful choice which you will never regret. Because it will not only get your trip more delightful and unforgettable, but also make it more safe and economic. So, combine and compared with all the evidence, I feel that the most amazing part of your touring may not be the place you visit but the people you accompany.