By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
By merging its two publishing divisions, the company will increase their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging from obscure textbooks to mass-market paperbacks.
A.their share of the country’s $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging
B.from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
C.to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging
D.in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges
E.to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country’s $21 billion book market, which ranges
A. their share of the country's $21 billion book market from 6 percent to 10 percent, a market ranging Their is the incorrect pronoun
B. from 6 percent to 10 percent its share of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges its is the correct pronoun, however which incorrectly modifies country instead of the book market.
C. to 10 percent from 6 percent in their share of the $21 billion book market in the country, a market ranging Their is the incorrect pronoun
D. in its share, from 6 percent to 10 percent, of the $21 billion book market in the country, which ranges This is very awkward sounding. "the company will increase in its share"
E. to 10 percent from 6 percent its share of the country's $21 billion book market, which ranges its is the correct pronoun and which correctly refers to the book market.