OG 12th 88 请教大家，谢谢：）

rudder26

2. (Thelonious Monk, who was a jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work both rooted )in the stride-pinao tradition of Willie( The Lion) Smith and Duke Ellington, yet in many ways he stood apart from the mainstream jazz repertory.
B. T M, the jazz pianist and composer, produced a body of work that was rooted both
D. Jazz pianist and composer Thelonious Monk produced a body of work that was rooted
B. The appositive introduces wordiness and unnecessary grammatical complexity…
我觉得这个同位语表达更清晰啊，
是为什么呢
对同位语这快清晰与否由什么讲究么？

venus2elva

我觉得B主要的错误是用了both，这里没有必要用both，而且容易与后面的and引起歧义。
简洁表达如何非常清楚，就没有必要再用同位语。D的表达非常清楚，相比之下，要比用同位语简洁。