The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
The computer company has announced that it will purchase the color-printing division of a rival company for $950 million, which is part of a deal that will make it the largest manufacturer in the office color-printing market.
(A) million, which is part of a deal that will make (B) million, a part of a deal that makes (C) million, part of a deal making (D) million as a part of a deal to make (E) million as part of a deal that will make
B: 1) When the word 'part' is used in the singular, the article 'a' is often left out. 2) The phrase, 'a part of a deal that makes', is in apposition to '$950 million' rather than the acquisition decision. Thus, it is not the sense intended by the speaker. 3) the present tense used in '...that will make...' is incorrect. Because what's been announced is a decision about the future rather than an existing event.