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108. authoritative parents are more likely than permissive parents to have children who as adolescents are self-confident, high in self-esteem, and responsibly independent.

C.children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.

我选的是C,答案是A.我觉得C直接说孩子的什么什么东西会更好。请大牛指点。谢谢。

bioalwayshuo

being permissive对我而言是个硬伤。are前的逗号没有必要吧。be responsibly independent中为什么用be呢？而且C的句子中心发生了转移，由家长为主体，变为了孩子为主体。C的问题太多了啊。

Jasonhere

不定式的to要省就一起省(除了第一个),不然每一个都要有

C中，...are the more likely to be self-confi dent, （to）have a high self-esteem, and to
be responsibly independent as adolescents

缺少了括号中的to

Jasonhere

发重复了，编辑掉

kunhou

支持一楼，c选项的问题不少。
children whose parents are authoritative rather than being permissive, are more likely to have self-confidence, and be responsibly independent when they are an adolescent.
rather than这个说法在这儿用的时候，后面的部分应该和前面的authoritative并列。其次，整个句子看起来，比a罗嗦许多。

venus2elva

C主语改变了，句子中心改变，而且很罗嗦。

JayNicholas

LZ能方便把全题都贴出来么  汗。。。

Eileenl

permissive 前的being貌似也没必要吧

EmmaWangNJU

樓主選的答案，第一眼看到“when they are an adolescent.” 就直接排除好了。。。

fansail

Children of authoritative parents, rather than permissive parents
变成了孩子和父母比较
可能要改成children of AP, rather than of PP