虚心请教NN一道语法题

EMINEM830505

Astronomers have uncovered evidence that a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into view 340,000 years ago, emitting dazzling radiation that could have disrupted Earth's protective ozone layer and sunburned our Stone Age ancestors.

A) that a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into view 340,000 years ago, emitting
B) that a star as bright as the full moon exploded into view 340,000 years ago, emitting
C) of a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into view 340,000 years ago and that it emitted
D) of a star as bright as the full moon, exploding into view 340,000 years ago and emitting
E) of a star as bright as the full moon that exploded into view 340,000 years ago and that emitted

serendipityh

选B吗?
Astronomers have uncovered evidence that a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into view 340,000 years ago, emitting dazzling radiation that could have disrupted Earth's protective ozone layer and sunburned our Stone Age ancestors.

A) that a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into view 340,000 years ago, emitting 黑体修饰月亮, 错误! 两个that凑一起多余, that was 可以省的
B) that a star as bright as the full moon exploded into view 340,000 years ago, emitting 划线部分插入成分, exploded 和 star 是一起的, emitting 伴随, 正确答案
C) of a star that was as bright as the full moon exploding into view 340,000 years ago and that it emitted 黑体都是有问题的evidence 应该用that 来接个内容, and that 没有平行对象.
D) of a star as bright as the full moon, exploding into view 340,000 years ago and emitting 逻辑意思改变, exploded 主要部分改成从属部分是不可以的, 成分改动太大,
E) of a star as bright as the full moon that exploded into view 340,000 years ago and that emitted黑体部分应该是修饰star 的吧! 现在变成月亮了.

sunjin1988

我觉得MM你可以报名去编写新破解PREP笔记了 MM好人 呵呵 解释的好

serendipityh

多谢夸奖!!

 我马上就考了, 考完就去

foreverlei

evidence that
A中evidence that a star 表达意思不正确
选B吧

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