i need you help.

qianqian2009

有没有好心人帮我看一下作文哦，今天第一天复习，还有九天就要考了。这篇作文没有看过别人的思路，自己写的，写完后看看别人的都是支持论，让我觉得我的反对论似乎不太站得住。谢谢，大谢！！

    

Independent Writing:

    

Renewable resources of energy (Sun, wind,
water) will soon replace fossils fuels such as
gases, oil, and coal. Do you agree or disagree?

    

 

    

With the rapid development of science and
technology, we human being, to some extent, has explored and applied some
renewable resources such as sun, wind and water, which bring about much energy without
contaminating the environment. However, I do not believe that in short time,
renewable resources of energy would replace fossils fuels , for today the main
energy resources is still fossils fuels which is in growing demand and the
current technology has not enough capability to explore and utilize the
renewable resources of energy in large scale to meet the need of increasing energy
consumption.

    

 

    

In the first place, we all know that
fossils fuels have almost been the main resources of industry and people’s
ordinary life for hundred years, and we have adapt to use these resources. Although
people now realize that the use of fossils fuels is generating serious
pollution to the environment and look forward to changing the current energy
resources, but we have to admit that many equipment and constructions operating
today are only available and functioned by using the fossils fuels and it would
take many years or even decades years to replace such equipment and
constructions with the new facilities which work with renewable resources. Take
cars for example, if one day all the cars which need petrol to launch should be
changed their engine to new ones which run on renewable sources, it is hard to
imagine how much time and much energy for governments or individuals to
dedicate into this huge change. What’s more, it would also take a lot time to tutor
people how to use the new renewable resources.

    

 

    

In the second place, though we wish the
renewable resources could be widely used, for they bring about efficiency and
few contamination thus cutting processing cost, the development and capability
of technology at current are not sufficient to make the wish come true. For
example, wind energy is welcomed by many people but its operation and usage are
limited because not every region has sufficient and satisfactory wind to
generate electricity, the same as the tide energy does. In addition, building a
system to convert the wind and tide energy into electricity or other resources
would need much investment and high technology, which, however, under such
circumstance, is not realistic and capable, for the majority of countries in
the world are still having troubles in dealing with the basic living problems,
let alone to invest huge vigor to develop such system. Therefore, it is
unrealistic to spread the use of the renewable resources in today’s technology
level and financial base, even if, it is only possible for few developed
countries.

    

 

    

To sum up, based on the above reasons I have
listed, to replace the fossils fuels with renewable resources in shot time is impractical.
Because to adjust the present industry to use renewable resources would take
much time and the technology capacity and financial base are not sufficient to
make such a transform under present level.  

    

svblaca

别的我不敢说，一看第一句我就知道，新东方的老式模板！我上次考试就是这样模板，结果很差。我不能确定是模板的问题，但是我这次铁定要改改了！
我没看完，不过好看看别人的满分作文，把好的都结合一些，别一成不变的照搬那样不成。
祝好运！！！

qianqian2009

不管怎样，还是谢谢你，我会注意的