1.its指代company's. 2.E里面(1)in both the short and long term修饰不清,也就是可能做定语,也可以做状语;(2)these products也无所指;(3)managers at a company不简洁。 另外有两点比较次要的: 1.ought to多用于比较客观的情况,如法律规定的。而should多用于主管判断时的情况,所以determine最好还是跟should搭配。 2.dedicate跟devote应该没什么区别,effort既可以被devote也可以被dedicate,见LDOCE解释: to use all or most of your time, effort etc in order to do something or help someone = dedicate devote your time/energy/attention etc to sth He wanted to devote his energies to writing films. devote yourself to sth She devoted herself full-time to her growing business. |