我最近看到Ron说这个"and also"的用法,在这道题里perfect。 正确句子如下: A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to winthe Nobel Prize for Literature. 作者要表达的是这么一个平行关系: 1) first woman to win the Nobel Prize for Literature 2) first swedish writer 而不是: 1) first woman 2) first swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature 如果你仅仅只用"and",读者可以理解为第一种,也可以理解为第二种,逻辑上都说得过去(有"first woman"的说法),这就有些歧义 而加上"also",这句子你读一读: ... the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to winthe Nobel Prize for Literature. 读的时候强调"also",逻辑意思一下子就明确了。 所以这题告诉我们,一切从meaning出发,从correctness&effectiveness出发。不是所有的"and also"都算redundant,我看Manhattan上面说GMAC出题的发展趋势就是要惩罚那些用"unwarranted shorcut"的考生。 大多数句子,and就够了,干吗画蛇添足加个also?这个句子,加also能让意思更清晰明确。 _刚找到Ron的原版解释,跟我以上有点出入,按他说的理解吧。 -- by 会员 babybearmm (2012/2/13 20:06:28)
感谢。明白了 |