【已证实！！！请教一个语法点】and also

kevinli120

XDF老师认为 and also重复，所以必错，但是今天GWD做到一题竟然选了and also，请问各位到底and also这个结构对不对？

麻烦各位帮忙，太难受了~

T-4-Q4

Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.

  这题虽然看上去否定了and also 的错误性，但是其实ETS还是不倾向这个结构的，理由是之前没做到这题，我都是拿and also错来做题的，而除了这题以外，and also确实还真没有对过。（也可能是小弟看的题目没有各位NN多，但是不说and also一定错，至少可以说明不倾向于这个结构）这题选到D，是因为其他选项都错。按照XDF老师的说法，先主要错误再次要错误，先语法后逻辑。序数词后面加不定式是固定搭配，固定搭配最大，没有道理，所以the first to win对，排除BCE，剩下AD。且不谈was的用法对不对（愚以为第二个was多余），A选项逻辑意思错了，SL是第一个变成女人的小说家？变性？所以选D，但是这题我觉得还是可以坚持之前and also的想法，就是用它来排除，至少应该有这个结构的选项先放一边，没有对的选项了再去看这种选项。今天看到一个CDer发了一个链接，说and also的，特意放上来，希望大家参考，请NN指证。

And also多余，已经证实。

http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/andalso.html

1. Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlof was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win

2. She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlof in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
                           

3. Selma Lagerlof was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
                           

4. A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlof became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win

5. As novelist, Selma Lagerlof turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also
                           the first Swedish write that won

答案为D

[此贴子已经被作者于2009/8/19 22:26:22编辑过]

kevinli120

自己顶

overthere33

and also应用的情况比比皆是 只要不是 both 。。and also或者 not only 。。and also就不算错

[此贴子已经被作者于2009/8/18 2:51:44编辑过]

kevinli120

以下是引用overthere33在2009/8/18 2:51:00的发言：
and also应用的情况比比皆是 只要不是 both 。。and also或者 not only 。。and also就不算错

感谢

kevinli120

And also多余，已经证实。

http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/andalso.html

kevinli120

以下是引用overthere33在2009/8/18 2:51:00的发言：
and also应用的情况比比皆是 只要不是 both 。。and also或者 not only 。。and also就不算错

希望NN可以给出几个SC的and also对的例子，因为小弟确实没有做到对的，除了举例子的这个题目，感谢

aeoluseros

umm...这道题目证实了and also之后用名词是起到了强调作用并不能算redundant.所以我个人推断是不是后面接主谓结构的时候前面如果and also同时用就是重复的。

很遗憾..gmat的官方题目里没再出现过其他and also为正确的例子。

horsecc

NICE!

泾渭不凡

and also在列举的时候多余，不过在also有时候是作为强调而且不用在列举中不一定多余（and also还有一种情况下是redundant的：both X and also Y）

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泾渭不凡

And also多余，已经证实。

http://www.wsu.edu/~brians/errors/andalso.html

-- by 会员 kevinli120 (2009/8/19 22:13:00)

LZ前辈~~这个链接链接出来好诡异的说。。。。看LZ一月回来了。。。希望再回来的时候能看看这个链接。。。。。后辈们也在纠结and also~~~谢谢！