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It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? why, use specific reasons and details to support you answer.

 

 

Many people might be confused by the alternative matter that they should support or oppose the plan of building a new restaurant in their neighborhood on account of merits and drawbacks. Different people have different opinions by reason of their special circumstance. However, from my point of view, I do strongly claim that there should be a new restaurant built in my community. I will substantiate my concrete reasons and evidence in the following discussion.

 

Initially, building a new a restaurant in my community where there are rare restaurants currently means I have the chance to eat some delicious and luscious foods, such like Italy noodles, Chinese dishes. I imagine paradise to be a place where I could consume delicious and yummy foods which is also nutrient. Sadly to say that in my neighborhood, there just few of little scale, dirty, and low class restaurant. So I, needless to say, will spread my arms for celebration when a new restaurant constructed in the place where is not far away from my house. It also means that I can stop preparing food which is not so tasty for myself. So I have more time to do thing I like, such as playing basketball, talking to a imitate, watching the TV shows and so on.

 

What is more , due to the economic crisis the unemployed rate in our city is so high that amount of people, who are under the suffer of poverty, could not find a job to support themselves or their family. Terribly, this unemployed rate could lead to the crime such as murder, stealing. However, apparently, this condition, bad to the society, will be definitely changed as a new restaurant built in my community, in our city. The new  restaurant means needing more employees, such as cook, cleaner, and waiter.  Considering this advantages I, who are extremely concerned about the society security, especially in the city where I live, believe that it is a right and wise decision to build a new restaurant in my neighborhood. So, it is a high time to build a restaurant.

 

Undoubtedly, some of disadvantage can be brought because of a new restaurant, for example there more pollutions, more noise, and more people whom I do not whether they can do bad things to the dwellers live in this region. But we could not conclude that building a new restaurant should not be supported just based on the above disadvantages.

 

So, to sum up, thinking to the some merits that can be product by building a new restaurant, I am glad and excited to see a new restaurant to be built in my neighborhood as soon as possible. I cannot wait and bear any longer time to that enjoyable and fantastic moment.