整理一下大家的思路 1. 修饰语紧跟修饰词： B. offer 【evidence】 more dramatic than what has yet been discovered 【of the close evolutionary relationship between dinosaurs and birds】 【】紧跟其修饰词evidence的 中间隔了一个这么漫长的其他部分
C. offer more dramatic evidence of 【the close evolutionary relationship 】than any yet discovered 【between dinosaurs and birds 】 【】紧跟relationship的 中间有插入了一个其他成分 这样的句子结构歧义 不紧凑
E. have offered more dramatic【 evidence】 than any that has yet been discovered 【of the close evolutionary relationship between dinosaurs and birds】 同B
2.最高级：the most…yet…迄今为止最… 比较级表最高级：more…than any other… A.D.是最高级的表达，较简洁 B.C.E是比较级表最高级的表达，罗嗦
Unearthed in China , fossils of feathered dinosaurs offer the most dramatic evidence yet discovered of the close evolutionary relationship between dinosaurs and birds.
A.offer the most dramatic evidenceyet discovered of the close evolutionary relationship between dinosaurs and birds（紧跟evidence修饰；“最高级+yet”固定搭配：迄今为止，最……；）
B.offer evidence more dramatic than what has yet been discovered of the close evolutionary relationship between dinosaurs and birds（what has yet been范围过大，且没有去掉被比较对象evidence，且“最高级+yet”固定搭配）
C.offer more dramatic evidence of the close evolutionary relationship than any yet discovered between dinosaurs and birds （“最高级+yet”固定搭配；就算没有yet，any后也要加上other one来排除被比较对象）
D.have offered（evidence证明的事实，不能用完成时，要有一般现在） the most dramatic evidence of the close evolutionary relationship between dinosaurs and birds（自行删掉了yet discovered，不忠于原文）
E.have offeredmore dramatic evidence than any （other）thathas yet been discovered of the close evolutionary relationship between dinosaurs and birds
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