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发表于 2004-3-2 15:27:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用晔子在2004-3-1 10:08:00的发言:
加了点经验。。就是经历吧~呵呵~~在最前面~~


谢谢晔子版主,晔子是大好人!!!学习学习ing!!! fficeffice" />

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发表于 2004-3-3 03:04:00 | 只看该作者
Congratulation! 申请顺利


    

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-3 09:56:00 | 只看该作者
哈哈哈哈~~谢谢lilyblue JJ~~


NOS呀~我最多是个小好人。。我还太小~~呵呵~~


为人民服务呀。。。哈哈哈哈~

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-3 10:49:00 | 只看该作者

flying04


这个是我的作文,太长了PM发不过去,你在这里看吧~~就是用了MR红的模板,然后稍微改了改~~


这个是我第二次考写的第一篇文章, 其他的人看了不许笑哦。。。


#29 some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live. What is you opinion? use specific reason and examples to support your answer.


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When it comes to the issue whether the Earth is being harmed by human, different people hold different point of views due to their past experiences. If I were faced with this issue, I would probably say that human activities have harmed the earth. In the following discussion, I would like to present few of the important reasons to support my viewpoint.


    


The most important reason is that human has polluted the Earth since the industrial revolution. For example, we produce millions of cars each year in the past century just to grant the demand for consumers. Every family in North America has at least one car and some of big families even have four or five cars. The carbon dioxide produced by all these cars every year is one of the main sources of air pollution. In some big cities, the colour of the sky has turned from blue to gray. Oil leakages from the ships during transportation pollute the ocean and kill animals living in it. Factories release untreated toxic water into the environment, which kill wildlife. Don't you think the examples quoted above are very persuasive?


    


Over exploring resources on the Earth harms the Earth is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. As we all know that many resources provided by the earth such as coal, oil, and other mines are finite. If we use them wisely, it can support human for an unlimited period of time. But according to a recent report, we can only use them for another 50 years with the current rate of exploring. We are taking them out of the underground way faster than we should. We are damaging the Earth by attacking its natural resources. If you can understand this, you can understand my viewpoint more deeply.


    


Admittedly, some human activities have tried to make the earth a better place. For example, we have planted trees in the city to help carbon dioxide absorption; we have created programs to save endangered animals. Nevertheless, we take more from the Earth than we give to the Earth and make our environment horrible, so the most striking conclusion is obvious.


    


To sum up, given all the reasons discussed above, we can safely reach the conclusion that human activities have harmed the Earth. If we just ignore the reality, I think you can predict what is going to happen to human race in return. In order to change the current situation, the government should establish laws with tougher sentence to protect the environment.

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发表于 2004-3-3 11:03:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用晔子在2004-3-3 9:56:00的发言:
哈哈哈哈~~谢谢lilyblue JJ~~



NOS呀~我最多是个小好人。。我还太小~~呵呵~~


为人民服务呀。。。哈哈哈哈~







这个……椰子不要老刺激别人, 作文写的挺不错,蛮好笑的。
[此贴子已经被作者于2004-3-3 11:03:52编辑过]
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-3 11:18:00 | 只看该作者
以下是引用llllll82在2004-3-3 11:03:00的发言:
这个……椰子不要老刺激别人, 作文写的挺不错,蛮好笑的。

哈哈哈哈~~`L你知道么,大人可以当GG。。。我没说是你呀。。。。


我的作文写的。。。没评价,被我英文老师看了非给我一个F不成~~~~


PS。不是不让你笑了么。。。你还笑~~~来,给你个椰子喝,堵上~


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发表于 2004-3-3 11:26:00 | 只看该作者
谢谢了,就要考试了,心里很紧张,好像什么都没复习好,象去碰运气一样.sigh
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-3 11:29:00 | 只看该作者
不要紧张~要想。。。偶能过~~然后大笑~~哈~~哈~~哈~~


然后睡觉~~。。。。。


还有考试之前吃饱点。。

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 楼主| 发表于 2004-3-4 06:33:00 | 只看该作者
作文好多人问。。我觉得作文总共就那么几点


有结构(用模板都有清晰的结构)


有理由(用14条万能理由,和自己能想到的,新颖的好)


有例子(这个就是胡扯,和瞎编)


没错字,语法错误少(其他都能有,就这个不能有,呵呵~)


然后就等着拿5分以上吧~~~HOHO

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发表于 2004-3-4 09:02:00 | 只看该作者
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