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发表于 2009-4-24 15:33:00 | 只看该作者

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Title: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In order to understand truly world event,some people think news from newspaper is better than televation news.Give specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

When asked about this question, the vast majority of people claim that newspaper is better than televation, but other people conceive televation has more advantages than newspaper differently. If I were faced with this issue, I would probably follow the latter.In the following discussion, I would like to reason and provide evidence support my viewpoint.

No issue is more important now than the one to get the latest news of the world. There are several advantages of televation as we all known that we can have a clear idea that what is happening in the world, we can have live information about the several events like sports and any other good or bad events happing on the globe. TV can provide some useful information about current events, allows us to follow the latest developments in science and politics,and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and entertaining. The most distant countries and the strangest customes are brought right into our setting-room.It’s possible for us to experience the Christmas in westen countries or to see the scene of the event lively. One also can have a weather forecast and according plan several things before time. If you want to have a picnic,you can decide whether to take an umbrella according to the televation weather forecast. Don’t you think these examples quoted above are very persuasive?

Save money is another head and chief reason that I have chosen to put here. TV is a good source of news which is much cheaper than newspaper. Only have you to pay for little electricity cost, it’s easier than to buy some newspaper.
    
To be honest,  a lot of what I know about the world is due to watching TV. If you can see that,you can understand it more deeply.

Superior as televation is, however, it’s also has own demerits , too.
   
Televation creats such a spell on children and in some cases it also effects the elders that they actually lose their own opinion they feel whatever is being shown on television is conect and should be practised as such.Watching TV for a long time will affect your eyes and nerves. Nevertheless, the advantages of televation carry more weight than the disadvantages, so the most striking conclusion is obvious.

To sum up, given the reasons discussed above, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we can safely reach the conclusion that only do I prefer to televation news, but also perfer to content as abundant as possible.


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