E 从结构上看,由于 but 前面是逗号,costing 即可以伴随前面的 took 3 weeks,也可以与后面的 using the canal 并列,是“夹心饼干”。而且 the move 不可作 in using the canal 的逻辑主语,其逻辑主语应该是人。 从整个句子的平行来看,第一个分局谓语动词 took... and cost...平行,而且这样的句子结构也与未划线部分的 took less than... and cost less than... 平行。 因此选 C
-- by 会员 mars_cheung (2009/10/31 14:35:00)
犀利 C项的平行 是key point
另外, A when ...was being moved ....being 明显多余 (另外, 前面的讨论说it 错误, 我感觉it 在这里做虚拟主语, 应该是没错的) B. 第一个it 多余, Moving a ton of .... took ..and cost.... 才正确 D.E 的cost 用法都有问题
lol, not as so easy. it in A, stands for moving a ton of blah blah```it seems ok, problem lies on the before, it is confused, and should b put in the first place `````
When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, ittook less than eight days and cost less than $6.
正确答案平行得太美丽啦!
A. When a ton of wheat was being moved from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100, but when the canal was used, it it 指代不清
B. Moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, it took three weeks and cost $100; using the canal, it 指代不清
C. Before the opening of the Erie Canal in 1825, moving a ton of wheat from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks and cost $100; on the canal the move和后面的took和cost平行得太美丽了! Gmat里还有个小现象就是两个不同层次但在逻辑上有联系的句子, 用分号链接最好
D. In 1825, before opening the Erie Canal, to move a ton of wheat took three weeks from Buffalo to New York City, which cost $100; moving it on the canalwhich错误用法,cost也改变了句子逻辑意思
E. To move a ton of wheat in 1825 from Buffalo to New York City took three weeks before the opening of the Erie Canal, costing $100, but in using the canal, the movebefore的位置改变导致了move to new york 在opening前3个星期