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kbkgqoo

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Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, but they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease

A. they began to grow again after the 1991 report that linked moderate consumption of alcohol, and particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease

B. after the 1991 report that linked a reduced risk of heart disease with a moderate alcohol consumption, particularly red wine, they began growing again

C. in a 1991 report, moderate alcohol consumption, and particularly of red wine, which was linked with a reduced risk of heart disease, caused them to begin to grow again

D. with a reduced risk of heart disease linked in a 1991 report with moderate alcohol consumption, in particular red wine, they began growing again

E. a reduced risk of heart disease linked to moderate alcohol consumption in a 1991 report, and in particular red wine, started them growing again

 ANS: A  想請問 B選項是因為重心跟but前面不平行 以及 began growning 這邊錯嗎?  我不知道A裡面 and particularly of red wine~為什麼要加and?? 降子是跟誰平行阿?  還有~~這邊是 link A with B嗎~ 這樣A不是有被and particularly of red wine割開嗎~?   敬請指點~感謝阿~~!!

jiaojiao1426

1.加and因为是连接了of alcohol and of red wine.同时补充moderate comsumption.

2.link A with B,这里的and particularly of red wine，是插入语成分，有强调的意味，所以不会有歧义。

3.另外个人认为link A with B这里的A B顺序不应该对换。

AlienX

B的問題:
- B是一個run-on sentence: Sales of wines declined in the late 1980s, after..., they began growing again.
- B的"particularly red wine"變了consumption的同位語

"begin to do something"和"begin doing something"都是acceptable idioms.

[此贴子已经被作者于2009-4-20 14:51:19编辑过]

kbkgqoo

以下是引用jiaojiao1426在2009-4-20 14:41:00的发言：

1.加and因为是连接了of alcohol and of red wine.同时补充moderate comsumption.

2.link A with B,这里的and particularly of red wine，是插入语成分，有强调的意味，所以不会有歧义。

3.另外个人认为link A with B这里的A B顺序不应该对换。

請問一下~~ 第二點~假如是當插入語成分~~可以不加and嗎?? 像是 

linked moderate consumption of alcohol, particularly of red wine, with a reduced risk of heart disease  這樣可以嗎??    

 

 還有我查了一下之前的帖子~~有人提到moderate consumption of alcohol 和 and particularly of red wine  是並列~! 

 那位什麼還要加逗號呢??  直接用and並列兩項可以不用加逗號嗎??  感謝解惑~!!

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 那位什麼還要加逗號呢??  直接用and並列兩項可以不用加逗號嗎??  感謝解惑~!!

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 還有我查了一下之前的帖子~~有人提到moderate consumption of alcohol 和 and particularly of red wine  是並列~! 

 那位什麼還要加逗號呢??  直接用and並列兩項可以不用加逗號嗎??  感謝解惑~!!

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 那位什麼還要加逗號呢??  直接用and並列兩項可以不用加逗號嗎??  感謝解惑~!!

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jiaojiao1426

我个人感觉如果去掉and,习惯上我们会用括号把这个插入成分括起来。

另外用逗号的作用就是指出是插入成分，因为它的结构是link the consumption with disease.

独眼豆豆

楼上的。

A选项本身就有两个逗号把插入语隔开了。

很明显，particularly of red wine就是做插入语用了。

既然如此，要那个and做什么？

and在句中到底是什么成分？

我当时一看到and就把A绝杀了。。