！语法求助！GWD-29-10

dearcrystal

GWD-29-Q10
The principal feature of the redesigned checks is a series of printed instructions that the company hopes will help merchants confirm a check’s authenticity, which includes reminders to watch the endorsement, compare signatures, and view the watermark while holding the check to the light.
A.        which includes reminders to watch the endorsement, compare signatures, and view
B.        which include reminders for watching the endorsement, to compare signatures and view
C.        by including reminders for watching the endorsement, comparing signatures, and viewing
D.        including reminders to watch the endorsement, comparing signatures and viewing
E.        including reminders to watch the endorsement, compare signatures, and view

答案是E， 我选A，因为我觉得E用including 有形容aucenticity的嫌疑，而WHICH的非限定性定语从句刚好来形容a series of instruction
不知道是我哪个知识点不对了？？？

songlovegt

在这儿不能用which，隔的太远了 which 只能修饰 authenticity

songlovegt

我现在倒是有个问题
while holding the check to the light 和那个句子并列呢?
holding the check 主语肯定是人 while (merchant are) holding the check to the light

往前找，merchant 作宾语呀，如何和while holding 并列呢？

dearcrystal

这个问题我觉得是这样

是reminders to watch the watermark while holding...所以其主语就是watch的主语，省略掉的merchant

songlovegt

同意LS
including reminders (to merchant) to watch the endorsement, compare signatures, and view the watermark while holding the check to the light
但是这样的省略不常见，看来while不是必须和主句并列，而且逻辑上的主语可以都省

songlovegt

那位大N给讲讲while在这儿的用法

初夏的味道

我也觉得应该选a

典座

刚查到，Ron说逗号+including是一个同位语修饰的例外。
Manhattan论坛搬运——when you see "comma + including", you should think of "including" as a preposition, not as an -ing modifier. therefore, "including X" will become a prepositional phrase that describes the stuff preceding the comma.
我的理解是逗号+including修饰的是逗号之前的名词，这里是支票的准确性。